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Chapter 3

 

The physician administered oxygen to Her Grace.  Her Grace needed rest.  She had no time to rest.  She motioned with a flap of her left hand that she had enough oxygen.

Then she spoke, her eyes burning bright with the glory of God. She projected such power, even from her wheelchair.  The acolytes all knew her story and reveled in it.  She was the eighth sister.  She had been forced to fly back to the States because of a death in the family, leaving the other sisters, the priests, and the few doctors in the compound 150 miles from Johannesburg.  The compound was a place of worship, healing, and death.  AIDS killed quickly in Africa.  There was not money, medicine, or enough skilled care.

After the funeral, she hurried back to rejoin the other sisters and the priests.  She wanted to heal and comfort.  The others had tried to heal and comfort and interfere in the Lord’s retribution.  Because of this, god had punished them.  The locals, full of blood frenzy, crazy with native beer, ganja, and anger over their plight, hacked the priests to death with long knives, then raped and killed the sisters and doctors.

Her Grace was punished as well.  She was punished for the sin of pride.  She was punished for not seeing the signs her Lord wanted her to see.  As Her Grace drove to the airport, hurrying to make her flight back to Africa, the rental car hydroplaned on rain-slick pavement and hit the bridge-abutment.  The injuries should have killed her, but they simply paralyzed her from the neck down.  Then, because she needed more than her glorious voice to do the Lord’s work, some feeling came back in her left hand.

Her savior made sure Her Grace was sufficiently motivated.  Back in Africa, during a follow-up operation, one of the units of blood she received during a transfusion was tainted with the virus. After one of her many near death experiences, God spoke to her in a vision.  AIDS and other viruses were not an enemy to be fought, but the sword of God to punish drug abuse, homosexuality and sexual promiscuity.  She made it her life’s work to help her God deliver his punishment.

A hush went through the acolytes.  Her Grace was again ready to speak.  Her words were soft, but filled the hall as if it had been designed to carry her voice.  It had been.  Her sweet voice rang out as if a song from an angel on high.

“God has spoken to me again.  We have fought a valiant battle, but our enemies are too strong, and the people not ready to hear the truth, even with help from churches here in America.”

The acolytes listened and were stunned by her glory and the beauty of God’s plan.  This time they would not be stopped.  Some were fearful.  The acolytes yelled and stomped their feet, excited in their quest to stop the misguided ones who would interfere with their savior’s work.

She let their applause wash over her, giving her strength, committing the sin of pride for just a few seconds before she shushed them.  They prayed together.  When their prayers finished, one of her guards slipped a mask over his face, stepped forward and wheeled her from the room. The acolytes were quiet.  They had never seen Her Grace this angry.  It was something they did not want to experience again, even if though the anger was not aimed at them.  The acolytes thanked their great but merciless God for this. She was not the one they should have been afraid of.

 

 

 

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Early to be early to rise and visualize, visualize, visualize

Early to be early to rise and visualize, visualize, visualize

Being able to clearly visualize an outcome dramatically improves my chance of achieving that outcome.  I had always thought that I had read the above quote somewhere, but darned if I can find it, so it’s mine.  It’s appropriate for me right now.  I woke up at 1:00 pretty darned excited and had trouble getting back to sleep.  This happens to me on occasion, especially when I have caffeine too late in the afternoon the previous day. After trying and failing to go back to sleep for a while, I thought I would get up and write this.

I’m going to put together as clear a picture of the day as I can, in light of the fact that I am going to need a nap.  Napping is doing something you know.  It’s called rest.  And rest is supremely important to recovery and growth.

Where was I?  Ah, yes visualize.  First, what are some important things that I want or need to do?  It can’t always be about need.  Sometimes you have to satisfy your wants.

One of the things I want accomplish today is to finish a comprehensive outline of the rough draft of my third novel, Aristocrasea.  I am writing  Aristocrasea differently than my other novels  ReWire and ReKill.  Did I mention that they were available on Amazon? Did I mention that if you click on the links you could read about them and then buy them?

I wrote ReWire and ReKill knowing where I was going with them.  At least I thought I knew where I was going.  With Aristocrasea, I sort of knew, but just went for it.  Now, the rough draft, at 90K words, is just too big to keep in my head.

Hence the need for the outline.  Hey, wait.  Did I just discover that my want has actually become a need?  Yep.

Is it reasonable to get this done as part of a day where I have also have some have-to’s?  How long will the outline take?  I am on page 210 of the rough draft.  The draft ends on page 234.  That is 24 pages to outline.  Based on my previous experience, this is doable and will take two hours.  Do I have two hours available in my day, based on my other needs?  Let me think.  If I rearrange some things, while still leaving time to work on my freestyle swimming stroke, finish this blog and format one of my books for print, this is doable.

First, I visualize where I will work on the outline.  I think part of the work will be at my dining room table watching the American River.  Being a social creature, I will also work on the outline at a coffee house.  Temple, Naked Lounge or Tupelo-which coffee house shall it be?  Hmmm?  Since they all work, I will decide when I am in my car.

What time will I work on the outline?  Since the outline is more necessary work than creative work, timing is not critical.  If it were creative work I would work on when I am at my mental and emotional peak-first thing in the morning or after my post lunch nap.

Do I need any tools or additional resources?  Nope.

Now, to visualize the actual finished product, which in this case, is an outline of a rough draft.  The outline will be about 9,500 words.  I am at around 8500 words now.  Doable, especially since I cut and paste some of the key words and sentences.

Next, I visualize how I will feel when I complete the task.  I am sure I will have mixed emotions when I look at the outline.  I will probably think, What a hot mess!  How in the f%^&K am I every going to finish this damn thing?  This thinking will leave me feeling less than.  And, I will probably think Damn!  Great job Johnny!  You are already 90K words into your third novel!  Who would have thunk it? 

This will leave me feeling elated.  (Did I ever tell you that when I talk to myself, I call myself Johnny?)  No?  Well, that’s probably the subject of another blog.

What will be the impact of finishing the rough draft?  Oh, there are many impacts.   I will feel elated and a little overwhelmed.  I will certainly be able to write much more effectively because of being able to refer to the outline instead of searching the whole freaking book trying to remember if I have already written something. I will know if finishing this novel by August, as I have promised, is doable.

That’s how it works folks and here are the steps.

  1.  Think about your schedule, skills, energy and other commitments. Does this task require a special time and place?
  2. Is it reasonable to get this thing done?
  3. Focus on how you will feel when the your goal is achieved. We are feeling creatures.
  4. See how I snuck goal setting in there?
  5. Think about how reaching this goal will impact you and others around you. There are always multiple impacts to achieving something.
  6. And, lastly, since you now have a  clear target, you will be able to hit it. After all, when Seth Curry puts up a game winning three, don’t you think he’s already seen the ball go through the hoop in his mind?
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ReWire A Thriller Chapter 1 Professionally Proofed and Edited

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Venture capitalist Jack McDonald is minding his own business and falling in love.  His younger sister Meghan, the brilliant young chief scientist at biotech firm ReWire is beaten into a coma during an apparent robbery.  Jack left his beloved Special Forces years ago to care for her when their parents dies in a car wreck. Jacks finally tuned instincts tell him that something is not right with the robbery.  Captain Alvin Yang of the San Francisco police doesn’t buy the robbery either.  Alvin, Jack and his eccentric friends work together and uncover what looks like a plan to sabotage industrial research into anti-viral drugs to make money from insider trading. If only the world was that innocent. 

                                                                         ReWire     © John Cameron 2012
    Men never do evil so completely and cheerfully as when they do it from a religious conviction. Blaise Pascal French mathematician, physicist (1623 – 1662)


                                                                                                   

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Chapter 1

 

The man put on thin nitrile gloves.  A careful observer might see his hands tremble and assume he was afraid.  But there were no observers, careful or otherwise.  What he felt was far from fear.  He did not feel fear, didn’t really feel at all.

He reviewed his plan one last time, but the review was not necessary. He knew the plan by heart.

He did not look up toward the security camera even though he had been promised that the camera wouldn’t work today. The long-billed baseball cap hid his face from accidental eyes and any peripheral cameras still working. Light rain fell.  He reached into the right hand pocket of his jacket and pulled out the key to the service door.  He inserted the key into the lock and entered the building through the service door, closing it behind him.

The man walked three paces to his left down the hall.  He effortlessly placed the heavy toolbox on the floor, pulled out the electric screwdriver, and removed two screws and a cover plate labeled “cable access.”  He reached into his left jacket pocket and removed a circuit board with attached connectors.  He attached the blue lead to the blue wire, red-to-red, and black-to-black.  The blinking orange light on the alarm system changed to steady blue.

The man placed the circuit board inside the access area and replaced the cover.  He reached into his toolbox for two magnetic labels, one for each side of his toolbox.  He hung a lanyard ID around his neck.  He removed his jacket, revealing a cable company uniform shirt, placed his jacket in the toolbox, and changed caps.  Now, he looked remarkably like the cable guy checking problems on the fourth, fifth, and sixth floors.

He arrived on the seventh floor winded and dizzy. He shouldn’t have taken the stairs two at a time.  He bent over, hands on knees, forcing air in and out of his lungs.  One of the drugs in his four-times daily cocktail killed off too many of his red blood cells to exchange enough oxygen. The drugs were not helping as much as he hoped.  The virus was winning the fight because he had received treatment too near the end.

He felt a flicker of something.  What?  Self-pity?  He put the small feeling in the box where he kept such things now.  He had never learned to feel much emotion except anger.  His childhood pushed most of his feelings deep.  Then the head injury left him with barely enough emotion to make decisions, one of the reasons he had been allowed this mission.  The devil’s servants could not read his feelings if there were no feelings there.

He waited on the landing until he could breathe.  He opened the heavy toolbox, took off the shoes he wore when entering the building and put on different shoes.  A careful observer would have noticed that the man’s right shoe was a different brand and size than his left.  The man slipped booties over his feet.

The man pulled the complex key to the front door from his right hip pocket.  He opened the door of Unit 7A, stepped inside quickly and closed the door behind him.  He pulled another even more complex circuit board from his toolbox.  He turned to the right and shifted the Gore-Tex jacket with ReWire corporate logo hanging on a peg in the mudroom, holding the jacket with his elbow. He pressed the wall behind the jacket and watched the alarm cover pop open.  The man quickly attached four leads to the appropriate connectors.  The light continued to blink red for a few more seconds and then turned steady green.

He pulled the stocking over his face, slipped the booties off his shoes, and checked his watch, confirming he had less than an hour and more than thirty minutes.  He moved as lightly as a dancer.  He was not even six feet tall, yet weighed two hundred and twenty-six pounds.  Very little of this was fat.  Even with the ravages of the virus and effects of the drugs, he was still immensely strong.  Not long ago he had been freakishly strong, as many men are who spend much of their lives in prison.

He moved quickly into the office off the hallway next to the master bedroom, having memorized the list of items and their location weeks ago.  The Toshiba Portege rested in its dock on top of the kneehole desk.  The MacBook Pro rested safely in its ergonomic bag.

The man dropped both laptops into the oversized gym bag he grabbed from the hall closet, pulled the desk away from the wall, unplugged two Time Capsules and dropped them in the bag.  He walked into the master bedroom.  The room smelled of clean, healthy women-and money.  He breathed deeply, enjoying both scents.  Then he remembered his mission.  He thought about what these women represented.

He pulled the ironwood jewelry box from the dressing table with a gloved left hand and tipped the box into the gym bag he held in his right hand.  He dropped fifty or so of the music CDs from the floating racks on the wall into the same bag. He heard the front door.  No!  She was early.

He moved quickly despite his foot, and was on the woman as she reached into the alcove.  The rail-thin woman with the wild mane of red hair turned fast as a lizard.  He meant to punch her square on her head and stun her.  He hit the right side of her head near her temple.  Something gave in her head and the beautiful woman bounced off the wall and puddled to the floor.  He dragged her into the bedroom by an ankle, checking to see if she was still breathing.  She was.

He lifted her up by her sweatshirt and held her against the wall.  He punched her in the abdomen and ribs, feeling ribs break.  He dropped her to the floor.  Still, she refused to die.  The man stomped on her right arm and kicked her left leg. He heard bones crack.  He kicked her in the side with his left foot first, moved to her other side to kick her with his right. Blood bubbled at the woman’s lips.  He scraped the fingernails of her dominant left hand across the piece of flesh in the baggie marked #1, placing the baggie back in his pocket.  When he was done seeding the rooms with the rest of the evidence, he would make sure she was dead.

He heard the front door open again.  A woman’s voice, “Sweetie, I’m home. Are you…what the fuck?”

He bounded toward the dark haired woman. She too bounced off the wall.  As she slid to the floor he saw the alarm fall from her hand.  A klaxon sounded.  Lights flashed.  He opened other baggies containing bits of hair, skin and fiber and scattered the contents around the rooms.  He slipped covers back over shoes, shoved more valuables into the gym bag and sprinted out the door, not noticing he had torn the scar pad on the knuckle of his right index finger.

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                                                                    Chapter 2

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The City looked different in daylight, dirtier, and less organized as if something changed in the weeks he had been away.  The already weak rain slowed to a lazy drizzle.  Jack loved the rain, but today something about it reminded Jack of a bad hotel shower, not wet enough to get you clean, just wet enough to move the dirt around.

Even in this part of San Francisco some of the signs weren’t in English. He saw Spanish, Chinese, Russian, and Farsi.  The rain thinned the morning crowd.  Thin crowd in the City was a relative term. As he jogged, weaving through the crowd, their hopes and fears rolled over him.  He heard many different tongues, some from tourists, but mostly from immigrants.  He heard Afrikaans, Korean, Persian, Arabic, Swahili, and Japanese.  He heard Cantonese, Mandarin and Spanish.  Hell, for all he knew, he heard Inuit.

His people had been immigrants too, once.  They’d been mostly white and Anglo-Saxon, but immigrants still.  A few had met the boat.  Most had been forced from the Highlands during the Clearances, making room for more profitable sheep.  Some had faced signs that said, No Irish Need Apply!  Historically, each new wave of immigrants brought strengths and weaknesses, like now.

The Vietnamese brought the brutal work ethic of the oppressed.  Eastern Europeans brought their hatred of bureaucracy and a complete disregard for The Man’s rules.  The Chinese were traders first and communists second.  Pent-up pressure of thousands of years of trader’s blood pulsed through the City.  Jack loved the mix of cultures, races, languages and food. Mostly he loved the energy immigrants brought-everything but the hatred too many of them met.

The melting pot’s energy was missing today.  He felt as if he ran through castoffs from a hundred lands, not the strong that left to better themselves, but the weaklings that couldn’t get a handout anywhere else. There seemed to be a high-pitched background whine to their feelings today.  The City reminded him of something and he couldn’t pull it from his jet-lagged memory.

He breathed in, thanking the breeze in off the ocean for air clean enough to smell the wonders of his city.  He inhaled the scent of curry and sesame oil and garlic.  He smelled peanut oil and searing beef and bacon.  He very much looked forward to breakfast.  He stopped suddenly as a Chinese girl, no more than ten, darted in front of him.  She carried a market bag with hot peppers in her left hand and red and green cabbage in the bag in her right.

Baoquian,” she said quickly over her shoulder.  He smiled at her and at the old Amah in the doorway of his favorite Dim Sum place.  The Amah shook a finger at the little girl, but couldn’t keep the smile out of her eyes.

He jogged a little further and then stopped at the sign, looking down at his iPhone to confirm this was the right shop, the one where Lee said he should stop.  The shopkeeper looked like he was a million years old and spoke Cantonese with such a thick regional accent Jack could barely make out that it was Cantonese.  Jack pulled out the piece of paper Lee had used to write down his order and pushed it across to the old man.

The ancient man looked at the note and rattled off more Cantonese.  Jack thanked the gods he didn’t believe in that the written language was the same for all of the languages and dialects.  He quickly jotted down that he didn’t speak Cantonese.

The old man smiled, showing amazing teeth for someone his age and wrote back asking Jack if his back hurt.  Jack nodded.  The old man pushed through the curtain behind the counter and was gone. Jack stretched, trying to stay loose after his run to the Embarcadero and back. The old man was gone for a good ten minutes before he came out with a small wooden box. He shoved a set of instructions across to Jack who read them and nodded.  Jack rubbed his fingers together in the universal symbol for money and shrugged.  The old man wrote down $475 very neatly.  Jack wrote down $200 and the negotiations began.  They quickly settled on $325, the price Lee said he should pay. Jack pulled the money out of his belt and handed it across.  The old man wrote out a receipt out by hand.

Dodze!” Jack stashed the small box inside the change of clothes in his running pack and headed out the door.

He floated in and out among the people on the streets, finally finding a rhythm. Something, somewhere shouted danger.  He turned off of Grant on to Pacific.  His headset buzzed.  He didn’t usually welcome the sound, but put up with it as necessary for business.  He smiled as he answered, knowing who it was, not because of any technological marvel, but just because.

“Good morning my fine chui!”

Hong Lee laughed as he called her his hammer, and asked, “Did the office call and tell you they were forwarding my call?”

Her voice, a soft brush-stroke of a Cantonese accent under well-educated European English, touched him.

“They didn’t tell me.  I just knew.”

There was a small silence, just a few seconds, because the answer might mean so much, before she asked the next question.  “Does your ESP, intuition, magic, whatever, usually tell you who is calling?”

“Nope.”

She chuckled low in her throat, sensual and eager.  “Very good!  I did more checking.  I know there is something going on, but…”

“Hold on!”  He turned off the wireless headset, cupped his hand over the phone, and ducked into a doorway, turning his face away from the street.

He disabled the blue-tooth on his phone and said, “Sorry my tian.  I was on a wireless headset.  An eight-year-old with twenty bucks’ worth of toys from Radio Shack could listen.  Go ahead, please?”

“I quietly checked on ReWire and the other stocks we talked about.  My intuition is nothing like yours, and I’m still absolutely certain something is going on.  But, and it’s a big, fat, hairy butt, none of my investment contacts know anything.  Just hints of rumors and even if they’ve heard those it seems they are…frightened or perhaps forbidden to talk.”

“Do you mean scared as in politically connected or really frightened of Yakuza, Tong, or Mafia?”

“Jack, you are naive.  We live in a modern world.  There is no distinction between Yakuza, Mafia, Tong and government.  I simply don’t know.  Any questions I ask in the future will come from a cousin, through an Uncle, by way of a hint.  If anything were substantial, I would have heard more than rumors about gossip. You are breathing hard.  I hear many voices.  Are you at the dojo?”

“No, jogging to Meghan’s.”

His sister had called to invite him for breakfast.  How could it only be a day ago?  He’d been in the car on the way back to the airport in Hong Kong.  Meghan McDonald, his very own younger sister, was Chief Scientist for ReWire, Inc., and the youngest biotech chief scientist he’d ever heard of.  He could tell she was excited and nervous and, for some reason, trying to hide her excitement.

 

Jack, I didn’t ask you to ask me about breakfast.  Sometimes a meal is simply a meal, and you have been avoiding us, whether it’s because you are busy, or for some other reason, which I am going to be nice and not go into now.  We have not gotten together in weeks and weeks.  And why you need to stay in that ridiculously expensive hotel when we have two, that is one plus one, empty guest rooms is beyond me.  As usual, there is only one, or one plus zero, of you.  Dvora promises her famous frittata and I will walk down to the café for your damned mocha.  Get your big brotherly ass over here on the fifth of November around nine-thirty, but certainly not before nine.  Have to go.  Important, complicated, scientific things to do!”

 

So he didn’t have a choice about breakfast.  Dvora was the reason he didn’t want to sleep under their roof.  He had been on his fourth date with Dvora when he introduced her to Meghan.  He’d never believed in love at first sight until they met.

He retold the message to Lee, except the part about Dvora.  Lee had met his sister a few times and heard way too many proud big brother stories.  Still, she laughed in the right places.

“It’s a shame you had to leave.  More nights like that and you will have to take vitamins and eat many, many oysters.  Should I make an appointment for you to see my herbalist the next time you are here?”

Jack smiled at the eagerness in her voice and the invitation.  Mostly he smiled at the tiny change in inflection.  Could it be that the most wonderful woman in the world was a bit worried he might not be back?

“I don’t remember any complaints,” Jack said.

“Absolutely none,” Lee purred with contentment.

“I remember a woman who wasn’t capable of speech for much of the night.  Although I do remember you making quite a few enthusiastic sounds.  Has it only been twenty-six hours since I’ve seen you?”

They talked, not saying very much, and saying everything.  They teased and laughed and said things that would only mean something to them as they enjoyed their private, eager, new lover’s knowledge.  He had always kept her at a distance-until now.  Now he wanted to be with her.  Maybe for…  He didn’t complete the thought.  He didn’t believe in jinxes, but who knew?

Beginnings were fragile things.  After he hung up, which he couldn’t do until long minutes after he planned to say goodbye, he missed her so much.  But…but, it felt as if a part of him that had been missing, that he didn’t know he didn’t have, was back.  His future felt less certain and, in spite of that, infinitely better.

Pedestrian traffic thickened.  He had to stop often.  He was pumped full of endorphins and infatuation and eager to see his sister. A guilty little part of him wanted to see Dvora.  Still, something lurched in the background and dragged at him more than gravity and jet lag.  Danger waited and the closer to his sister’s house, the stronger the danger felt.  He picked up his pace.

He was nearly to the corner of Pacific and Jones when his phone sounded with the emergency signal.  Robert E. Lee White, head of security said, “We lost connection to your sister’s alarm, so we were monitoring police chatter in the area.  There has been an injury robbery in her building and it’s locked down.  We can’t access the cameras and the building’s alarm system has been hacked.  We have a team on the way, but in this traffic…”

“Bob, I am a minute away.  I’ll call.”

He picked up his pace.  He didn’t try calling Meghan’s mobile.  She never answered her fucking phone. She probably didn’t know where it was.  Dread washed over him like pounding surf.  He rounded the corner of Pacific and Jones.  He could see the flash of lights of the emergency vehicles as he went into a kick, stretching his stride, pumping his arms and leaning into the run.  A swelling, gawking crowd, thick with cops, blocked the street.  The crowd surged inward toward Meghan’s building as the police held them back.  He plowed through the crowd.

A big man he threw out of his way yelled, “Hey! What the fuck…”

Some primeval sense of self-preservation made the man step back.  A uniform cop moved in front of him as he ducked under the bright, yellow, crime-scene tape.  Her nametag said Crowley.

“Sir, move back under the tape.  Now!  This is a crime scene.”

He smiled as if nervous, let air out of his lungs, bent his knees, and slumped to make his body seem smaller.  He clumsily ducked back under the tape.  Crowley moved to head off a surge by another tentacle of the crowd.  He slid back under the tape, staying low, and floated over the ground toward Meghan’s building.  Three more cops, one of them with sergeant’s stripes, moved to intercept him, all with hands on holstered weapons.

He forced himself out of combat mode, softening face and stance.  It wouldn’t do any good to hurt cops.  “My sister lives here,” he said.

The young sergeant stepped forward, bulging from years in the weight room under his carefully tailored uniform, and said, “The building is sealed, Sir.  There has been a violent robbery. The perpetrator may still be inside. Would you tell me your sister’s name, please?”

Jack opened his mouth to answer.  How could his mouth be so dry?  He heard his name shouted in a cracking voice.  “Mr. McDonald!  Mr. McDonald!”

It was Thomas the doorman, standing just outside the tape less than fifty feet away.

Jack moved toward him.  The sergeant stopped him with a gentle hand.

“Excuse me, Sir, may I see some ID?”

Jack’s stomach tried to empty.  The sergeant carefully checked his ID against the printout on his clipboard, rain barely spotting the clear plastic cover, and told him what he already somehow knew and absolutely didn’t want to hear.  There had been a violent robbery, details still sketchy, Meghan seriously injured and rushed to the hospital in an ambulance, Dvora injured as well.  When he was sure of the hospital, he turned and ran by staring people and through those who wouldn’t get out of his way.

He’d covered less than a block, turned right onto Sacramento and cut out into the street in front of the first cab he saw. The driver locked up the brakes, the dented bumper coming to rest against his wind pants.  Russian curses streamed through the barely cracked driver’s window along with an acrid cloud of cigarette smoke.

“A hundred bucks when you get me to St. Francis Hospital Emergency room in less than three minutes,” he said as he jumped into the back seat.

“Show me the cash,” the cabbie said.  He held the bill through the slot.  The driver’s ID said “Dmitri.” The Russian hit the gas. He fishtailed around the corner of California and Hyde, and punched two reds that didn’t have cameras.  Jack grabbed the door handle, thinking, Hold on, Meghan! He still had too much time to think in the two minutes before the cab drifted the corner of Hyde and Bush and skidded to a stop in front of the emergency room.

“Where’s Meghan McDonald?”  He asked the young nurse standing at the terminal outside the emergency room.

“We only give information to next of kin, Sir.”

He pulled out his ID again.  The nurse reached for the ID and punched in the name and asked, “Her address?”

Jack told her. The nurse keyed in the name and address.  As the nurse scanned the screen, the nurse’s face tightened.  When he looked up, Jack could see the effort it took to keep his face supportive and neutral.

“Meghan is in operating room six.  Take the elevator to the third floor, first left and second right.”

He wanted to ask how his sister was, and asking anyone was the last thing he ever wanted to do.  He stood by himself outside operating room six for a long time, years it felt like, yet he was only on his own for one massive hour.  The adrenaline of battle coursed through him.  He was aware of every sound, every feeling and every smell.  The second hand on the clock moved slower with each tick.  He came to know that clock very well.  He got to be very familiar with the little squeak his running shoes made as he turned to the left while he paced up and down the hall outside operating room six.

It was too quiet by far in that lonely hall in that place of death and pain.  He could hear his own breathing and feel a thumping deep in his chest.  Soon he thought he could hear his heart.  He wondered if his heart had always sounded that way?  Within painful minutes he couldn’t focus on anything outside his head no matter how hard he tried.

Jack became intimate with regrets and “should haves” and “could haves.”  The “should have” of spending more time with Meghan after he came back to the States to care for her.  He had “shouldn’t haves” of spending too much time on business.  Every time he thought of another thing he would do different, if he had a next time to do things different, he checked the time.  He found that beating the shit out of himself about things he couldn’t change didn’t take much time.

Jack wanted to know if he would have a whole sister again.

Jack had a gift or a curse, depending.  He could predict the future, often, not always. When doom waited, he mostly knew.  Maybe it was his mix of ancestry.  Perhaps his gift was a mutation, some roll of the DNA dice.  He knew that not many had such gifts, or if they did, wouldn’t accept their gifts, feared them or didn’t know how to use them.  His intuition, magic or whatever in the hell it was, wasn’t taking his calls today.

Dvora arrived in a wheelchair, pushed around the corner by an orderly.

“How is she?” Dvora asked.

His voice came out in a croak.  He walked to the water fountain, having to think about swallowing.  Had water always been this cold and difficult?  When he found his voice he said, “She’s alive.  Other than that I don’t know anything yet.  Nothing.  How are you?”

“They say I have a concussion, so that’s why the wheelchair. And, two cracked ribs, which is why the bandage.”

“What happened?”

She sat up, trying to get comfortable in the chair, wincing and sucking air.  “I don’t know.  Everything after I left for the studio this morning is gone, just gone.  The doctor said that happens with head injuries.  She said the memory could come back, probably would come back.  I told the police I couldn’t remember.  Apparently they see this kind of memory gap a lot.  The policeman in charge, Captain Yan, said I should come by the station in a few days and he could help me remember.”

“Captain Yan?”  The name was familiar.  Jack thought back to the first time he heard Yan’s name.  In his memory, he stood, drink in hand, dressed in a tux, at a fund-raiser by the San Francisco police for the families of their brothers lost on 9/11.  Commissioner Ramirez was exchanging stories with the DA.  He tuned out Ramirez as he exchanged what he hoped were meaningful looks with the fantastic-looking black woman in a pearl-white dress across the room. Ramirez’s tone startled him back.

“Yan is the best cop I have ever seen-a legend.”

“Why haven’t I heard of this legend?” Jack asked.

Ramirez laughed.  He had a mean laugh. “He has no need for glory.  Tell a career criminal Yan is interested in them and they’ll shit themselves.” Jack heard confusion and grudging respect.  He remembered the conversation nearly word-for-word because he didn’t think Ramirez could admire anyone.

Dvora said, “They think thieves were in the house when Meghan came home from Yoga.  She must have surprised them.  They say I came upon the scene later.  One of them must have hit me a glancing blow.  I must have hit my panic button.”

Dvora tried to stand and Vince the orderly gently guided her back into the wheelchair.  Finally, she stayed in the chair.

They waited.  Mid-afternoon, another shift rotated into the OR.  News came at 2:47 with the shift change.

Meghan had a fractured skull, hence the coma.  Also a ruptured spleen, a dislocated hip, fractured ribs on her right side, and broken ribs, one that pierced her lung on the left, and too much more to think about.  Dvora cried, quietly at first, then not so much.  Soon her grief was a keening sound, as loud as Bedouin women made in those old National Geographic Specials, the sound of the women screaming their dead into heaven.

Jack didn’t try to quiet Dvora, but plucked her out of the chair and held her as he walked up and down the hall.  She didn’t say words, just made that sound of anguish and beat on his back with her fists.  Vince came back at a trot and finally did something useful.  He scouted them a room, one of the little rooms they have in hospitals for people to pray and fall apart in.

Within minutes her wailing stopped, replaced by a quiet complaint about her ribs.  He gently set her down in one of the chairs, sitting next to her.  He left an arm across her shoulders, to comfort himself as much as her.  They waited.

 

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Apple vs FBI-The State is Wrong and Lying

The state is misleading you.  The only way access to encrypted data would help the state is if no one knew the state had such access.  The state can’t be trusted.  The state, whether ours or China, or Russia, has proven repeatedly that it will ask for a tool only to use it in ways to entrench its power.

The FBI has asked Apple to build firmware so that the FBI can gain access to an iPhone.  Apple said no.  The head of the NSA has said that if NSA could break encrypted communications they could have prevented the terrorist acts in Paris from happening.  The head of the NSA, as usual, lies.

History tells us that the State, especially in the case of the United States, depends on technology in intelligence gathering and fails miserably in human intelligence.  Example:  Osama Bin Laden used a satellite phone.  A politician, in order to grab attention, let slip that the US state could track his cell phone.  Osama stopped using the cell phone except to provide disinformation to our “intelligence” apparatus.  Osama realized what any intelligent person realized.  Technology could be defeated by trade craft. Bin Laden started using couriers to transmit information.

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Trade craft is old school and can only be defeated by trade craft.  Trade craft requires an investment in human capital. Examples of trade craft are dead drops. A spy or terrorist drops a note in a hidden place for another spy to pick up.  The courier dropping  the note does not know what is on the note.  The spy who picks up the note does not know who the courier is.  The spy reads the instructions, destroys the note and no one, unless they are willing to torture the spy, can figure out what the mission is.

We all use this old school trade craft when we vote.  We walk into a voting booth and punch a card or punch a button.  We push this button anonymously and the number of buttons pushed or cards punched is counted. We elect someone.  This system is not perfect because someone has to tabulate these numbers and when they do tabulate they can alter the data.  The system is not perfect because we keep electing politicians who take control of more and more power.

Right now, any intelligent person who wishes another harm has come to a realization. The realization is that he or she can not depend on any technology based means to communicate.  The state will find a way, under the guise of protecting us from terror, or global warming, or aliens, to access all technology available.

So, is the state really naive or simply using this apparent threat to exert more control of citizens?  Based on your observation of the state, any state, what do you think?

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ReKill, A Thriller by John Cameron Chapter 16

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Chapter 16

 

Forest fires are common in the Trinities in June. They are more common in August and still more in September. Moisture comes in off the Pacific Ocean as the occasional summer storm. Most of the storms dump their load anywhere from the Lost Coast to Crescent City, the clouds too laden to climb the mountains. Some storm energy makes it over the low coast range and twists and turns through the valleys to soak parts of the Trinities and Salmons. The forest dries out. Lightening from a thunderstorm picks a tall tree or rock outcropping or a hiker to short out on, and it is fire time. Funny thing. They watched the system moving in on radar during the flight in to Redding. All the lightning strikes from the sparse thunder-bumpers were at least twenty miles north of Mike’s house.

Heather stepped in front of him and looked up, eyes huge in her face. She looked thinner than when he had fallen asleep. He wanted her to stay at the hotel rather than go to her house. She said, “It’s my home. If your home was burning wouldn’t you have to go?”

The fire fighters had already put out the smoldering shrubs around the house. They had to fell two burning spruce. The great oak that adopted Jack wasn’t touched. The firefighters labeled it arson within seconds of their arrival. It was now a crime scene. They were more effectively sealed from the property than if someone posted armed guards. Was the attempted arson a way to keep them away from Mike’s house until the enemy could get reinforcements?

 

HEATHER walked up to the fire chief. It was hard to think of him as Chief because he had always called her dad pops. Her dad dated his mom long ago before she married someone else. That was the little joke. If only things had been a little different he would have been Mike’s son. He was one of the few people in town who stayed on her dad’s side. Her dad always said firemen were caring people. He would follow that with a laugh, saying firemen’s relationships were mostly train wrecks. Larry Morton looked huge in the heavy fire suit. He wore the big, funny hat that meant someone nice was coming to help.

“Hello, Mr. Morton.”

The soot around his mouth and eyes creased into a comforting smile. The area around his eyes was whiter from where he had taken off goggles. “Heather, I am so, so sorry to hear about your dad. He was a fine man. You know my momma was always wistful about him. I hate the way the town treated him. And, now somebody tried to burn your home. It’s terrible the way folks in this town are acting. I am ashamed for my neighbors. You make sure you come see me if you need anything.”

“Thank you. Could you please let me go in and get my guitar and practice amp?”

Mr. Morton shrugged his big shoulders, made bigger by the fire gear. He looked at the ground and said, “I’m so sorry, Heather. I can’t let anybody in until after the arson investigators get over here from Redding and clear the place.”

“Is there any reason you can’t go in and get my guitar and practice amp for me? The guitar is the last birthday present I will ever get from my dad. It’s a Paul Reed Smith, Orianthi SE. My dad got Orianthi to autograph it ‘Happy Birthday’ to me. And the Gibson practice amp, please?”

He looked like he was going to say no, then he squared his shoulders and said, “I am the chief here. I will get them for you, list them as from the crime scene, take pictures and have an adult sign for them. Is that okay Heather?”

“Yes, please?”

Jack, Lee and Brigit gave her space while she talked to Mr. Morton. How could someone be mean enough to try to burn her house down right after her father died? She decided she wasn’t going to think about it. She watched Jack and Lee stand and wait. It was strange the way people reacted to Jack. Men either acted like roosters or seemed like they were a little afraid. Some men, like Mr. Morton, big, powerful men, seemed fine around him. The way Jack looked at Lee was a fine thing. Maybe someone would look at her like that someday.

The inside of the house hadn’t been touched. Dad said that their rustic looking cabin had a fire suppression system worthy of a combat ship. When he decided to keep the trees in close he installed a 1000 Gallon cistern in the reinforced attic with two high-speed pumps. They were near the end of a long power supply from the local power company. There were only two ways to break free from the power company. One was to install a generator. The other was to install a dynamo on the little creek that ran year round through their section.

Her dad had loved the wild little creek. It would have been impossible for him to dam except for one thing. There was a part of the creek that roared down over a pile of twisted, broken concrete. Years ago someone broke up a slab and, rather than taking it to the dump, dropped it off the cliff into the creek. He’d had the slabs moved up stream and buried them under the rocks of his little dam. He had electricity and a prettier creek.

Being a finicky man of infinite patience and someone who liked to tinker, he did even more. He set solar panels on his roof and a bank of batteries in his cellar. Somehow his power supply from the creek had been interrupted. The batteries in the basement did the job and four hundred gallons of water cascaded down on his roof, dousing the fire before it had a chance to get started. She already missed her finicky, funny father.

Heather thought about that guitar. She’d asked for it and explained it to her dad, why it had to be that guitar. She asked three months ahead of time. He was preoccupied with a deal, but she thought she’d gotten through to him. Then, about a month before her birthday he got all excited about something. He couldn’t keep a secret from her. She figured he’d bought the guitar. So, she looked in all his hiding places. She couldn’t find it.

Then, on her birthday, Heather opened her other presents and no guitar. Her dad made an excuse that he had to run into town quick before he took her to her birthday party. She figured he was going to give the guitar to her at the party. Bobbie, the dorky Fed Ex guy, showed up with a big box addressed to her. She looked at the address and saw that it was from LA, not from a music store and not from the factory in Stevensville, Maryland.

Heather carried the box inside and happened to glance at the sender. It was from Orianthi Panagaris. She opened the box carefully, hoping. There was her guitar. On it was written:

 

Happy Birthday Heather!

Let’s jam

Orianthi

 

Finally Mr. Morton came out with the practice amp and the guitar. She let him carry her light practice amp out to the Suburban, but asked if she could carry the guitar.

“Mr. Morton, could I please carry the guitar?”

“Okay, Heather. And, I’m serious about helping out if I can. Your dad was a fine man and he always helped people out when he could.”

She waited while Jack signed for the guitar and amp.

 

JACK had seen too much death. Heather hadn’t seen any that he knew of. Her world had just been snuffed out. Little girls get their self-esteem from their fathers. Mike had loved her well and now he was gone. He had done a good job helping her set foundations for the rest of her life. How the rest of it turned out would be up to her and maybe him and Lee. The thought that he might be responsible for how another human being turned out terrified him. When their parents died and he had to take care of Meghan, he hadn’t had the liberty of time to think about it.

God damn it, Mike,” he thought. “Why in the hell did you leave me in charge? I don’t know anything about raising kids.

But, he did know something about raising kids, from trying to raise Meghan. He had always figured if he did the opposite of what his parents did, he wouldn’t do too badly. There was one thing he knew for certain. Lee had enough nurturing love for a whole room full of kids, big ones like him, and middle sized ones like Heather. The trip back to the hotel was quiet. The ex-cop stayed, so they didn’t need to check the rooms. Lee led Heather back into her room. How in the hell do you take care of an almost twelve year-old girl whose father had just been killed?

Heather needed to be around friends. How many friends did she have left after her father killed off the prison? Was she better off away from stuff that reminded her of Mike or nurtured by things familiar? Like most rich kids Heather had a shrink. This one was actually a psychologist. Mike insisted, saying if he had to rely on luck he wouldn’t have been sane enough to take care of his only daughter.

“Brigit, you said the shrink contacted Heather as soon as she found out, right?”

“Yes, she did. Nice woman, a friend of their family, from what I hear, came and talked to her for a half hour. Right after she left, the aunt scooped her up.”

“I need some help on what to do, whether we should try to keep Heather here or take her back to the City. Could you call her and pass her off to me?” Brigit nodded and headed into the room they had quickly turned into an office.

IT wasn’t long before Lee softly slid out of the room they assigned to Heather and gently closed the door. She leaned her forehead against the doorframe for a while before she slid onto her man’s lap. He rocked her, bouncing her on his knee as if she were the child who needed cheering up, tucking her head under his, as she drank in his smell. She didn’t realize how hard it would be trying to help Heather feel and at the same time shield her from it. She hadn’t thought she would relive her own loss.

She talked so quietly her man had to move his ear near her mouth. She could feel her own breath, warm and a little wet. “She hid a lot of it from me before, when we had our talks on the phone. I knew it was tough, but not how tough. She lost most of her friends, even closest friends from school, soccer, and clubs because of what her father did. Her friends’ parents counted on the prison. They needed the prison to sell houses to the guards, hardware to the builders, dinners to the construction crews, and plumbing supplies for the new houses. Because it was private, the addition to the local tax base could have been 40%.”

She looked at the framed photograph of the Joss House above the mantle. “Her teachers, other than the hardcore greens, made her life hell. She was suspended from school for having a fistfight with her former best friend. Her father’s allies in this were men and women he normally despised. And now…”

He held her, stroking the back of her neck where skin disappeared into hair, rubbing her back, giving strength, as she thought that she had to be the luckiest woman in the world. She jumped up and gave a little shake.

“What have you been doing?” she asked, turning his head away with her hands so he couldn’t see the circles under her eyes and her face puffy from tears.

They moved to the table and he showed her the local news articles he pulled up on the net. Mike had taken Jack’s idea and run with it, taking the seed of a strategic outline and turned it into a specific tactical battle plan. He’d formed a new non-profit corporation, Friends of the Trinity Vole. The group succeeded in having a temporary restraining order issued to stop further ground improvement and construction preparation.

If you live in the Western US and thought you had seen a tiny gerbil in your house, chances are it was a vole. It has a round face, not sharp like a mouse or rat, but more like a tiny guinea pig. It is longhaired with its hair brown above and gray below. This species of voles is the smallest of the western voles, around six inches long, fully grown, with nearly two inches of that being furry tail. Its ears are tiny and nearly hidden. Unlike many mice, this vole excavates its burrow.

He moved the Air so that they could both read the screen. The Trinity Vole’s habitat was the problem for the prison builders. Most Voles lived in forests on the floor under rotting logs. This species thrived in grassy meadows and farms that were just the kind of nice, flat area the prison would have been built on. Their range was extremely limited according to the Friends of the Trinity Vole. An artificially introduced predator, the red fox, had reduced the vole’s breeding area to less than four percent of its former range. Now over half of its breeding area was on acreage the prison was to have been built on. The local paper didn’t think a whole lot of the vole.

Each editorial walked a fine line of being a liberal paper supporting all things green and outrage that something so important to the local economy was being stopped. If it were a state or federal prison project, there wouldn’t have been a problem. The state could and did ignore the environmental impact laws because they didn’t apply to them. Since it was to be a privately built and run prison, the rules had to be followed.

The president of the local chamber of commerce was a good quote.

“Letting a pest, especially one that has not even been declared a separate species, much less an endangered one, stop the building of a prison that is necessary for the safety of all of Californians and vital to the economy of this area, is a travesty of environmental law.”

A rally celebrating the prison construction stoppage, just two weeks ago, was interrupted by a brief, but violent, confrontation. The factions were the Friends of the Trinity Vole, or FOTV, and picketers who supposedly represented the local unemployed. Rumor had it that the men who attacked the FOTV had been assured they would be first on the list for jobs at the prison or on the construction site.

JACK found the work that Mike had done fascinating. Even if it hadn’t been, he would have found it so. He grabbed any distraction to avoid feeling the death of his friend. He looked up to see Brigit stomp into the room and stop in front of him.

“What?”

She opened her mouth and a croak came out. He handed her a glass of water. She tilted her head back and drank until she drained the glass. She wiped her mouth with the back of her hand.

“That fucking bitch!” she said. She paced back and forth. “It took me six tries to get through to Heather’s shrink. I could tell the damn receptionist was lying about her being in session. I had to call from my cell phone and disguise my voice, saying I was feeling suicidal, before she would talk to me. Then I had to fucking threaten her with a subpoena to keep her from hanging up.”

She tap-tapped back across the room to stand in front of him. Even standing she was only an inch or two taller than he was sitting.

“When the Judge talked to me about what he wanted me to do, I did some checking, not only with him, but other places. In custody battles it’s almost always about the money. With rich people it’s more about the money than with poor people. The Judge laughed when I brought it up. He said you were more about ‘fairness’ than anyone he’d ever met. So the last time I talked to the shrink I shared that with her, told her Mike had picked you for that very reason. When she found out it wasn’t about the money she opened up a little bit. I thought she was a hell of a nice woman. I thought she cared. That was nine hours ago. Now she’s recommended to child protective services that Heather should be a ward of the State of California until a custody hearing.”

He thought about the change in the shrink’s attitude. There were drawbacks to him being considered the world’s best potential father figure. He was unmarried and living with a woman who was a foreign national. On the other hand he was, according to some, wealthy, healthy, and successful. He contributed heavily in time and money to local charities. The list went from CASA to funding and coaching youth Judo in inner-city Oakland. And he actually had experience at raising children — well one gifted, wonderful, scary-smart, funny, younger sister anyway.

News stories flashed into his head. He stopped reading them long ago, hoping the memories would go away. He remembered one story in particular, despite having tried to forget it for years. A little girl is beaten to death by the new boyfriend of the mother. This is a week after Child Protective Services decided keeping the child with its drug addict mother was better than taking the child away. Could the shrink have changed her mind because the state had proven itself much better at raising kids than the environment he could provide? The odds against this being why she had a change of heart and him being struck by a meteorite while playing polo were about the same. He didn’t play polo. Brigit said what he was thinking.

“Somebody got to the bitch.”

 

TRINITY County did not have a medical examiner. There were only four counties in California with full time medical examiners. San Francisco, Marin, Los Angeles, and San Diego. In Trinity County, the coroner, who was an elected official and not an MD, decided whether the death warranted an autopsy, based on California law. If there was an autopsy, the body was transported to Redding. There an MD, who wasn’t a full time pathologist, usually performed the autopsy. They were more than happy to have one of the best pathologists in the world do their work for free.

Doctor Giddings started the autopsy at 7:00 that morning and finished at three. By four PM he sat across from Jack at the small meeting room in the hotel.

Dr. Giddings hands always held Jack’s attention. They were long-fingered and thin even for his slender frame, with tendons standing out with each movement as if all the flesh had been rendered away. Dr. Giddings hands normally shook. At first Jack thought a pathologist didn’t need to be as precise with the dead as a surgeon working on living flesh. But, steady was important. A thin slice of flesh that missed the air bubble or the minute piece of fat that caused the embolism was just a slice of flesh. If his work was done with care, it could lead to improved treatment or surgical practice. As evidence, his expertise could help convict or free.

Dr. Giddings pale skin accented the dark circles under his eyes. Rumor had it he had been a hell of a surgeon. Then he hit that string of luck that surgeons sometime hit and lost three people in three days he thought he should have saved. After that, he’d gone the other route with an obsession about the causes and effects of diseases. Dr. Giddings flipped through his autopsy notes.

“I was called upon by the family to do an autopsy. I was asked to perform a medical-legal autopsy by the coroner. The autopsy is used to determine a number of things. First, I was to determine the cause of death. Was it a fall or gunshot for example, then the mechanism of death, heart failure, drug overdose etc., and the manner of death, accident, murder etc.?”

Dr. Giddings gratefully accepted another cup of tea.

“I wanted to first establish if the death resulted from an uncontrolled fall. I know it sounds as if it is unimportant to differentiate between a controlled and uncontrolled fall at nearly 400 feet, but the logic has to be followed. Many uncontrolled falling deaths are from roofs and ladders less than a dozen feet off the ground. A significant percentage of people survive controlled falls of a hundred feet or more.

Cause of death was an uncontrolled fall. I determined that the victim had not been killed somewhere else and carried to where his body was found. The level of damage and contaminants from the local environment, combined with picture evidence, and description of other physical evidence from the scene, all led me to establish that the fall killed your friend Mike.”

“For mechanism of death you could flip a coin. You could say it was massive head trauma or spinal trauma significant enough to cause failure of Mike’s cardio pulmonary mechanisms or massive trauma to his heart caused by shattered ribs.” He looked up.

“Have you done the math, Jack? Do you know how long it took him to fall?”

Jack hadn’t wanted to do the math, but his brain loved math and did it without asking. Mike had fallen nearly 400 feet. “He fell for four and a half seconds.”

Dr. Giddings nodded and said, “A long time to think about the certainty of your death, but at least when he hit it was swift. I would think he lost consciousness upon impact in a very small part of a second. Next, I wanted to see if there were any obvious signs he had been restrained prior to the fall. Was he handcuffed or tied up and then thrown off the trail and the restraints removed at the bottom? This was disproved by a number of factors. No evidence of constriction at wrists, forearms, or ankles. No evidence of super glue, tape, or any of the other things people use to restrain other people.”

Dr. Giddings leaned back in his chair breathing deeply into his nose and out his mouth. He intertwined his hands as if he was going to make a steeple and then turned them inside out over his head. It was the least favorite stretch of anyone who made it through rotator cuff surgery. The doctor’s look was grim as he leveled his gaze at them across the mahogany table made too glossy with Old English Oil.

“The newest restraint method is shrink-wrap, which was hard to figure until we did analysis on the clothes of a number of victims and picked up the plastic. The lack of evidence of being restrained either physically or chemically, at least so far, is only part of it. He had torn the nails on his left hand on a rock twenty feet down from where he started his fall. Part of the left middle finger nail was still imbedded in a root sticking out. It is consistent with other live falls. He tried to catch himself on the way down. This would have been very hard for him to do because his left hand had been stomped on four times just before his fall.”

As the Doc told the story the fire in Jack’s belly grew. He dampened the fire. The burning embers roared back into flame, threatening to burn through.

“I looked at the injuries to the small bones of the left hand with x-rays. I have seen similar injuries before, some in gang beatings where a man is stomped to death. Unfortunately and, more usually, the same types of injuries are seen in children who die from abuse.”

Someone stomped on Mike’s hand. There was a tiny piece of a Vibram™ boot-sole in the skin of his left hand. The lug pattern on the back of his left hand was consistent with the pattern of a Vasque Three Seasons Hiker. The marks were sharp and clear as if made by new boots. It was a left boot. That meant the marks were probably made by someone who was left-handed. The boot struck down on the hand with great force. Somehow Dr. Giddings concluded with a high level of certainty that Mike was attempting to hold on to the edge of the trail while his hand was being stomped.

Some of the bones in the hand had been crushed nearly to powder. This is very difficult to do. Dr. Giddings was convinced that when they found the man who stomped him that he would be large and freaky strong. Not just weight-room strong, but NFL lineman, bus-pulling strong. Dr. Giddings was very sure the hand had been stomped on four times, because of the prints in the back of the hand.

The urge to live is the strongest urge there is. Even a tiny break in one of the little bones in the hand is horribly painful. In this case there were twenty-seven breaks. Did Mike feel as if he was weak letting go with a hand broken in twenty-seven places? Had he held on thinking, Stop! It hurts too badly. But wait. I can hold on. I know I can. I can deal with this pain as long as I know I will live. He was able to see the boot coming down again. Did the stomping men look away in guilt? Or, did they enjoy Mike’s pain and his knowledge of his own certain death? Had they taken their time? Did Mike think, No, No!! I can handle this, but not again, please don’t make this horrible pain worse.

Then the boot came down again. Did he want to let go and not let go, thinking that anything could be endured, but please someone, please come along the trail? Did he think, I know it hurts, hurts worse than anything, even the explosion that tore off my other arm, but I can hold on until the hand is mush, until it is flat and part of the earth? Or did he think, I have one missing hand now? Even if I survive there is no way this hand is ever going to work again. I will not suffer through life with two hooks.

Could he have clung to that rock ledge not thinking at all? How did he feel as he fell nearly 400 feet to the bottom in almost five seconds? How many lifetimes would that feel like, knowing he fell to a certain death? What kind of man could stomp on a one armed man’s good hand until it was so broken he couldn’t hold on any more? He knew there were men who could do things like this. He knew there were men, and women, who could do worse.

Jack had killed three men less than a year ago when they fought the Church of the Seven Sisters. He had killed many men years before. If it had been up to him, he would have killed a lot more men and most especially killed one woman a year ago. If their plan worked, these men and women would have done evil on a level much greater than an Amin, Taylor, or a Hussein. They might have achieved the status of a Hitler or maybe even a Stalin. Perhaps they would have reached the killing levels of a Mao.

Like most zealots, the members of the church didn’t have the impact they hoped. He didn’t believe in trying to get inside the heads of his enemy. Feel what they are feeling. Think like they think and you can defeat them. The inside of his head had enough cracks in it now. He didn’t need to understand. He just needed to get close enough to hurt them until their black hearts stopped beating.

“What about the cancer?”

The Doctor took another sip of the tea. “I have examined his colon completely. There is evidence of removal of polyps. You will have to subpoena the samples and his medical records. I am sure the samples will be lost. You should also subpoena the records from the lab. Not only paper records, but electronic records as well. But, I see absolutely no evidence of anything remotely resembling cancer of the colon. “

“Do I understand you right? You have found no evidence he had cancer of the colon or even evidence a competent pathologist would think he had cancer?”

“That is correct.”

Jack thought about the doctor’s answer. It was way too easy to believe in conspiracy, but it is so hard for anyone to keep secrets. He felt as if he was fighting an enemy he could only see pieces of. This enemy felt big and organized and smart.

“I think I know the answer, but I am going to ask anyway. Can we keep this quiet?”

“I have to report it. I can screw around with the results for a couple of hours before I send the report back to the coroner, but that’s as far as I can delay it. Do you want a copy?”

“Send a copy to the office.” He didn’t want to see the details of someone cutting into what was left of Mike’s body.

Dr. Giddings left to fly home.

“Jack, I think we should tell Heather now. I mean she already knows, but she really doesn’t know,” Lee said.

Lee did most of the telling. They didn’t tell her all of it. They didn’t tell her about the stomped hand or what it must have felt like to fall for nearly five seconds. When they were done Heather asked for time alone in her room.

A little while later Heather walked out of the room with her guitar slung over her left shoulder. She looked as if the skin on her face drew tighter with each hour. He had never met her mother, knew her only from pictures and Mike’s heart-breaking stories. When Mike lost his second true love to cancer he hadn’t climbed back into a bottle. He climbed into fatherhood. It looked like Heather had inherited the best of both sides of the gene pool. She had her father’s olive skin, lean bone structure, and laser-paper white teeth. From her mother’s side she inherited blue eyes Two radically different genetic structures in the jaw resulted in orthodontics. She still had a while to go on her braces.

Her normal style was brainy, funny and must have come from her mother. Her father was a man given to reflection and long silence. She was one of those very quick young women.

“Do you guys know why I took my guitar and amplifier?”

“The comfort of music?”

“Well, it does, give me comfort, I mean, but that’s not all of it. My father..,” she bit her lip and stopped. “My father said helicopter pilots had to be anal by nature. He is, was, and he worked at it too. Mike gave me copies of his research. He said if anything… if anything happened, I was to give a copy to you. I hid the CD’s in my practice amp.”

She handed over two CD’s. The labels on the cases were the kind of CDs any right thinking almost 12 year old would, he hoped, hide from her parents. Or better yet, not listen to at all. One of the bands, or do they call rap groups bands, was called the Pussy Fucking Gangsters? The other was the Bitch Slapping Home Boys. Even if someone searched and found the CDs they would assume she was just hiding music from her parents. If someone really thought it through , they would know twelve year olds don’t buy CD’s. They buy downloads, or vinyl to be retro-cool.

“There are other copies too. Mike mailed one to a friend every time he added a lot of stuff to his research. She lives in Maine. She copies them and then puts a copy in her safety deposit box.”

 

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ReKill, A Thriller by John Cameron Chapter 15

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Chapter 15

 

Jack loved small planes. The first time he went up in one he expected it to be herky-jerky and immediate-like a bumpy ride on a hard sprung car. He hadn’t expected the soft, floating feeling of riding on a river of air, like a noisy canoe in the sky. Grounded humans didn’t think much about air. Flying in a small plane taught you quickly the sea of air wasn’t all that less thick than a sea of water.

He thought being a pilot would give him freedom, the same kind of freedom his Air, the web, and mobile gave him. He thought he would have time to go more places and avoid the anthill traffic. His theory was correct, but he discovered something emotionally he already knew intellectually. There are limits to the time a man can invest in being good at things. Something as important as taking off and landing a plane was better left to the highly experienced expert. Maybe now he was only working fifty hours a week he’d have time to fly enough to become an expert.

Damn it, Jack! Why didn’t you pay more attention?

Jack stuffed his feelings as far inside as he could.

The pilot was a hell of a lot better than Jack had ever been. She put them down with hardly a bounce. The little plane went from being an efficient, semi-comfortable, flying taxi to a loud, uncomfortable oven.

Brigit’s guess on time had been pessimistic. Their brand new attorney wasn’t more than five feet tall even in heels. She wore a dark blue power suit that looked black until they were under one of the too-bright floodlights near the main terminal. She looked out of place at a regional airport in the middle of a hot runway.

She was somewhere in that great age-range for women, between forty and fifty, where the outside image sometimes starts to fade. Sometimes it’s only then that their core comes through. Her very dark blue eyes, which he thought were contacts and found out later weren’t, were large in her round face. She had a wide, but thin-lipped mouth below a snub of a nose. Her hair was that wonderful silver-gray some women are lucky enough to get by nature and others pay a lot for at a good salon.

Brigit shook his hand first, making long eye contact and holding the grip. She did the same with Lee. “I don’t know how hard this is going to be. I haven’t called the cop shop yet. We’ll just show up at the Aunt’s house so we don’t give them time to hide the kid. I called a PI I used to work with, former cop, and he is on his way, already has a place set up to keep the kid at a hotel in Weaverville. Turns out Mike already contracted with him to keep an eye on Heather.”

They had walked out of the airplane into a too warm a night. It had only been 104 in Redding that day. Now that it was approaching midnight, it was down to 80. They climbed into Brigit’s Suburban, heading onto I-5 and cutting over to 299 for the hour trip into Weaverville. Whenever they came near a bridge over a creek or a finger of a lake, Brigit slowed. Sometimes she slowed by taking her foot off the gas and sometimes with a little brake. The rest of the time she found the best line on nearly every turn and took them as fast as her-land train allowed, so it wasn’t caution. Four Orvis rod cases stuck out from under the tarp in back. She was self-programmed to slow near water for fish sign. He doubted she even realized she was doing it. Jack wondered, maybe for the first time, what programming he followed that people could see and predict.

Lee’s silence spoke volumes on the plane. On the ground, in the air-conditioned silence of the Suburban, her quiet was a scream. Lee rode shotgun. He took the seat directly behind her. Tai Chi, Yoga, and the rest gave her a rubber-boned smoothness, but tonight she sat up straight and stiff as a new West Point cadet. He unhooked his seat belt and leaned forward, shoving his head in between her head and the passenger door. She softened, leaned a little to the left to let him in and then nuzzled him with her head.

“You okay?”

She shook her head no, thumping him on the temple. She sniffed back tears, before they made a little river down her face. He wiped them away with his fingers.

“You know what it is. That poor, poor girl has got to be destroyed. I didn’t spend much time with my father, but we were so connected by our gifts. I was away at school, he was always working, but when he died… It took me a year to get even partially sane. It’s not just her pain I feel now.”

The sheriff’s station in Weaverville wasn’t manned for the night. If the aunt called the cops, and they responded, they could settle the issue on the spot. Brigit had all the toys in her land train but couldn’t program the address into her GPS. After three wrong tries, they turned off a BLM road onto a deeply potholed gravel track. They followed the track down through a wash and then up to a sagging doublewide on a couple of scruffy looking acres.

There was a dead Ford Ranger on what would have been the lawn if there had been any grass. A gray primer covered Power Wagon was parked next to the trailer facing out. A digger pine had been dragged to lean on an ancient stump near the aluminum hovel. It looked like someone cut the digger for firewood a log at a time. Lights showed. The sound of bad country music barely carried over the breaks in hoarse barking from the Pit Bull chained up to the trailer hitch. The dog had wound his chain around the front post under the hitch so tight he could barely stand, much less get at them. His water dish was dry and his ribs showed.

A big man, belly over his belt, shoved the door open and asked, “Who the fuck are you, and what the fuck do you want?”

The John Deer hat was pulled down so far in front it was hard to see any of his face except the gray and black beard. Jack came to a stop at the bottom of the splintered steps. Beer smell floated down to him.

Brigit stepped forward and said in a courtroom voice, “My name is Brigit Williams. I am an attorney and officer of the court. I have a court order remanding Heather Maria Reyes into the custody of Jack McDonald, who is standing in front of you. Please have her come outside.”

A woman’s voice screeched from inside the trailer, “Tell them she’s not here.”

“She’s not here,” beer boy said.

 

HEATHER practiced twenty times more with her homemade grappling hook. She heard a car off in the distance. It came closer and closer. And then it stopped. That poor dog kept barking. After she got out she would come back for the dog. When asshole boyfriend yelled at her the pit bull lunged at him.

She heard a woman’s voice, Jack’s voice and asshole yelling some back. Rescue!

She waited a few seconds to calm herself like she did before a penalty kick, swung her grappling hook, snagged the two by four on her first try and pulled to the side as hard as she could. The two-by-four wouldn’t budge and then it sprang sideways and made a big bang. She was out of the bathroom, then at the back door and then out.

 

BEFORE the sound of their lies died in the dry air, the back door Jack hadn’t seen hammered open and slammed against the thin walls of the metal shack. Heather sprinted into Lee’s arms. The screechy voice attached itself to a messy woman, maybe in her late forties, trying to share too small a doorway with beer-belly boy.

“Heather, you get back up here. I am your auntie, flesh and blood. You can’t go with these strangers. We care about you. Your poor father…”

“The only thing you and your asshole boyfriend care about is the money and you know it. Dad told me if anything happened he wanted me to go with Lee and Jack, not you. I am old enough to make up my own mind anyway.”

They backed up to the Suburban and got onboard, ignoring the screeching woman and bellowing man.

“Can we get out of here? I’m sure asshole boyfriend has a shotgun or hunting rifle handy,” Jack said.

Brigit spun the big SUV around as if it were a BMW and gunned it down the drive and onto the road. Jack rode shotgun while Lee and Heather cried and huddled in the next set of seats.

 

BRIGIT’s cop had booked them into the best hotel in town, with solid, brick walls and only two stories. They had taken four rooms, two of them suites and all connecting, on the second floor at the end of the hall. Brigit knocked. The quality of the light out of the peephole didn’t change, but the door opened. The ex-cop was maybe fifteen years older than Jack and tall enough to look down at him. They were about the same weight, just distributed differently. The cop had that quiet confidence cops used to have when they still cared enough to serve and protect.

He held out his hand and said, “I’m Bill Saxon. You won’t need to worry about keeping Heather safe. I have three daughters. All with their own families now, but they are still my babies.”

Bill’s hands were large and his grip firm and dry. He thought about Bill’s age and physical condition. Then he thought about Bill’s mission. It wasn’t Bill’s job to wrestle with anyone who got near Heather with harmful intent. It was Bill’s job to shoot them until he ran out of bullets or they stopped doing anything threatening. A strong grip, clear eye, skill, and willingness to pull the trigger were all that were necessary. There were ex-cops at the judo club. Half of them were drunks. Bill’s eyes were clear and Bill didn’t give Jack the uneasy feeling he learned from the cradle around Ma and Pa.

Lee, Brigit, and Heather all walked into the big bedroom to talk. Jack looked at the clock, thinking way too much had happened for it to only be two a.m. He sat in the overstuffed chair in the corner to rest his eyes for a few minutes. When he opened them it was five in the morning and Mike’s house was on fire.

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ReKill, A Thriller by John Cameron Chapter 14

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Chapter 14

 

Heather Reyes sat in the locked bathroom in the back of her aunt’s crap doublewide, wondering when Lee and Jack would come get her. Aunt’s asshole boyfriend had stepped on her iPhone. He said it was an accident but she knew different. She didn’t like the way he looked at her when her ‘Auntie’ wasn’t around. And her father was dead. There was no way he had killed himself, no freaking way. She might only be nearly twelve, but she knew her father loved her more than anything in the world and knew he wouldn’t do that to her, no matter how bad the news from the doctor had been.

Her dad always told her everything important. He was sort of a hypochondriac. He had IBS and they’d done a colonoscopy and he’d been worried about a couple of the polyps they removed. Then his doctor called and he’d laughed and tried to act like he wasn’t worried. She knew her dad wasn’t a great actor. Okay he was a terrible actor. No, that wasn’t right. He had been a terrible actor.

She had always been able to figure out what he bought for her birthday or Christmas and knew exactly where it was hidden. He was an open book to her. Now, she could act. She could always keep things from him when she wanted to-not that she ever really wanted to. She just sort of kept in practice for when she started dating.

She cried again. She wouldn’t need to know how to hide things from him. She wouldn’t watch him be proud of her, see the look of concern when she went on her first date, get to listen to him tell that her dress was too short or her top showed too much cleavage, if she ever got cleavage. She wouldn’t get to see him try to intimidate her boyfriends. She wouldn’t get to see him cry at her high school graduation, or college or medical school. She wouldn’t get to see him smile when she became a surgeon. She wouldn’t have all those wonderful years.

She told herself, “Get it together, Heather!” She would have plenty of time to cry later.

Right now, Heather was acting helpless. The bathroom door lock was on the inside, but her aunt’s asshole boyfriend had pushed something up against the door from the outside. Heather couldn’t budge the door. She had been pounding on the door and screaming. Then she figured they were going to keep her, so she stopped pounding and screaming. There was enough of a gap under the door so that if she lay down on the filthy, peeling, linoleum floor she could see the hall. There was a two-by-four jammed under the doorknob.

She first thought to get out of the window, but after she measured she knew she wouldn’t fit through, even though she was pretty slim through the hips, one of the reasons she was so fast.

Think, Heather Maria Reyes! Think!

She sat down on the toilet seat, after she covered it with paper towels. How could people live like this? Then she did what her dad taught her when he showed her how to find wildlife. She let her eyes slide over everything in the place. She looked at the shower, looked at the sink, looked in the medicine cabinet, looked at the toilet, looked under the sink. Then she assembled everything that looked like it might help.

There was an unopened enema bag and hose. She pulled the hose out. She dropped on her side again and looked out under the gap in the door. The two by four was jammed under the lock to her right. If she could wrap something around it, or catch it with something, then she could pull the two-by-four to the side and get out and then run out the back door. She knew she could hide forever from fat asshole and Auntie in the woods. And she could certainly outrun them. She was second fastest on her soccer team and had taken a silver medal at the last meet in the eight hundred.

She had a problem. She didn’t have anything she could put on the end of the hose so that it would catch on the two by four to pull it to the side. She looked at everything again. She looked at the toilet, in the medicine cabinet, under the sink. The toilet! That was it. She took the cover off and unhooked the chain that connected the flapper and the lever.

The hook on the end was pretty flimsy, but it was all she had. She tied the hose and chain together and practiced flicking it out flat. She needed to practice wrapping it around something. The curtain rod! When she pulled it down she looked at the hooks on the curtain rod and shook her head. Hiding in plain sight. Heather Maria Reyes took the flimsy flapper chain hook off and secured three of the curtain hooks into the chain near the end and practiced. By her thirty-eighth try she was hooking it around the curtain rod she had leaned up against the wall nine times out of ten.

She sat on the toilet and thought for a while. She tried to think about getting out, but she kept coming back to her dad. She knew he didn’t have cancer. He just flat out couldn’t act. She knew he was worried about something else. He hadn’t told her what it was, but he said that he had done a lot of research and he was sure the fix was in. He even hired a former sheriff’s deputy to keep watch on her. The only reason he hadn’t stopped her aunt and fat asshole was he was in a hit and run on his motorcycle, broken leg, and his replacement hadn’t shown yet.

Dad said there were some hard case types around town that didn’t fit. Before his family sold the mill, he had hired ex-cons to work there. He said these guys were ex-cons, but different. Perfect teeth and no tattoos, but he could still tell. He said he called Jack and was going to see him. And he had given her two CDs to hide. Heather Maria Reyes didn’t know how she knew, but she knew someone killed her dad and tried to make it look like suicide.

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ReKill, A Thriller by John Cameron Chapter 13

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Chapter 13

 

Their visit with Mike had been three months earlier. Mike had done what Jack suggested, despite Mike’s misgivings. Once he decided to go, he went all in. Mike’s source in the environmental movement was Dr. Talbot Early, Professor Emeritus of Environmental Studies at Humboldt State University. Mike took forestry management classes from him before he’d gone to Vietnam. He asked Talbot, honestly and openly, if there were an endangered species he could support in the Trinity Area. Then Mike sat down and looked long and hard at how smaller green organizations achieved their goals.

Mike found that full-time management by someone who was committed, someone who didn’t have the distractions of other jobs, someone from the in-crowd of greens, was necessary. Mike picked Dr. Jeremy Bernstein, who according to the headhunter they used he was a perfect candidate. To run the “Friends of the Trinity Vole.” Bernstein did his undergrad work at Berkeley and his Masters at the University of California at Davis. Jeremy had a just finished a postdoctoral fellowship. He’d produced a dissertation on the destruction of rodent populations in Northern California’s mountainous regions during and after commercial logging efforts. He was forty-one and had held two paying jobs in his life, neither in the private sector. His longest period of employment was six months.

Mike funded “Friends of the Trinity Vole” through a blind trust. He deeded the trust 30,000 shares of Intel, current market value at $38.33 a share, or a tad over one million dollars. His cost basis was $4.30 a share. The tax write-off was on the appreciated stock price, and he didn’t have to pay capital gains on the appreciation. There were lawsuits and counter-suits. A temporary restraining order, or TRO, stopping construction before it even started, was issued. An injunction was in the works to permanently halt the prison project.

The spokesperson for the Friends of the Trinity Vole sighted two recent studies published in the Journal of Western American Environmental Study as reasons the Vole was a strong candidate for the endangered species list. The California Department of Fish and Wildlife, or CDFW, had already placed the species on their severely endangered list.

Because the population was so small, the limit set by the CDFW for take incidental was one sixth of a vole. What this meant in English was anyone doing any construction in the area, in addition to normal permitting process, had to put a plan in place proving that only one sixth of a vole would be harmed, killed or have its habitat destroyed by any project. Since this would be impossible, any building was effectively dead in the water.

Mike called earlier that day, leaving a voice mail message. “Jack, I need to talk to you. Something has come up that’s, well… Something important came up. I’ll fly down tomorrow morning.”

Heather answered when Jack called back. Mike was out for his one of his usual afternoon hikes and didn’t have cell phone reception. Jack told her to tell him yes, fly in tonight if he had to. Jack put in a long and productive day of work, walked out of the office and onto the street, enjoying the energy of the crowds of locals and tourists. The tourists were easy to spot. You could see their blue legs because only tourists thought that summer was summer in the City.

There was a cell phone ringing somewhere. He stopped, fumbling in his backpack. It was the emergency ring from Lee.

Her voice calmed him. Something happening to her was his first fear and if she was calling it couldn’t be that bad. Then he heard what she had to say. “Heather called. Mike’s dead. Heather held on long enough to say her aunt is trying to take her again. Heather says she has a copy of a court order appointing you and me guardians. She says there is a typed suicide note with what is supposed to be Mike’s signature. The note says he found out he had cancer of the colon and couldn’t face it. Heather says no way. She would have known if he had cancer and he loved her too much to leave her. Then the phone died.”

Jack didn’t remember hailing the taxi. His friend, his good friend and business partner, was dead. When he tried to look at his anger, it skittered and ran away, like some wild thing that didn’t want to be examined. His ex-wife used to say he only used two emotions and one was anger. She said his anger was the rocket fuel that drove him. She said if he ever managed to let it go he’d never be as successful. She believed in astrology, so what the hell did she know?

He was never furious with himself for the things he had done. He saved his self-directed ferocity for the ‘should haves,’ things left undone. This left the burning bile in his throat of a step not taken. He knew one thing with more certainty than the fact that he should have immersed himself in Mike’s problem. What he knew with absolute certainty was that his friend Mike hadn’t killed himself. Mike’s life had been a brutal series of disappointments. Heather was the brightest spot in his universe. Taking care of Heather, being there for her, was what he lived for.

A little investment in time along with effort to fight the inertia of his life and he knew his friend wouldn’t be dead. Damn It!

“What do we do?” Lee asked.

“Get us an air taxi into Redding. It’s a proper airport so we can land after dark. We’ll make the calls we have to now and the rest on the plane. Are you okay?”

“No, but I will be if I can stay busy. That poor girl! Did you know she is going to become a doctor? She was going to give her father his hand back.”

The same mortar round that tore up his back and nearly killed him made sure he’d never father any kids. A tiny hot piece of metal had punched its way into his testicles. That infection went unnoticed amidst all the others. By the time they went in, it was too late. At first he’d felt a sense of relief he wouldn’t have to be responsible enough to be a parent. His parents had done such an actively poor job he would probably have been better off being an orphan. Then he’d felt the pain of never. He’d buried that pain. Or thought he had. What would it feel like to have someone love him as much as Heather loved Mike?

Lee and he divided up jobs by phone while he was in the cab. One of his jobs was to call the Judge. Judge Lionel Thomas Jefferson III wasn’t in his chambers and didn’t answer his cell. The clerk wouldn’t tell Jack where the Judge was, but promised that the Judge would call back in a few minutes.

Jack’s phone rang in less than a minute.

“What is it this time, Jack,” the Judge asked, before a coughing spell that lasted too long and left the Judge struggling for breath.

“Mike Reyes, my partner, my friend, is dead. He fell to his death while he was on a hike. They are trying to say it is suicide, that there is a note, which is total bullshit. There’s no way he’d abandon his daughter. There is supposed to be a document assigning Lee and me as his daughter’s guardians. Her aunt is up there now trying to grab the girl and with her the loot.”

The phone was silent but for a faint hiss in the background, like the SSSSSS from the snake in The Jungle Book. The sound carried on too long. Jack knew that sound and didn’t want to know he knew it. That soft hiss he’d heard in so many hospital rooms was the faint hiss of oxygen. He knew the cough was worse but he hadn’t known how much worse. He had seen too many lives run down hill on oxygen.

“Are you certain there is a document naming you guardians?” the Judge asked.

“Lee says Heather, Mike’s daughter, says there is.”

“We will assume there is. I will need a certified copy. Soon. There should be a copy with Mike’s attorney. Find out who that is for me. I will write an order remanding her into your custody. Where is it again?”

“Weaverville.”

“The county seat is in Redding, I think. No, Weaverville is the county seat. You will need a local attorney strong on family law. Can I reach you on this number?”

“Yes. Thanks, Judge.”

IT COST a whole lot less to charter a plane, at least a small one, than people thought. Jack actually owned a small piece of a jet, but it was down for its annual. Jack’s mind focused on airplanes. Then it focused on airplane noise and then the rough flight. It focused on everything else he could think of so he wouldn’t have to think about the things he should be thinking about. It felt like an hour, but it was only ten minutes into the flight when the phone he blue-toothed into the noise-cancelling headset rang.

“This is Brigit Williams. The Judge asked me to call this number. Is this Jack?”

“Yes it is. Has the Judge filled you in?”

“Pretty much. I was actually on my way to Redding when he called. I don’t know if he told you, but I am semi-retired. Why should I take you on as clients?”

He closed his eyes while he put himself through a cycle of combat breathing. The truth shall set you free. “Mike was one of my best friends and one of the nicest and best men I ever met. He lost his arm right below the elbow in Vietnam flying medical evacuation helicopters. His daughter loves him so much, she was going to become a doctor so she could give him his hand back. Her aunt, who tried to steal Mike’s money twice through his daughter before, is trying to take the daughter again. I will pay you a $50,000 cash retainer when you meet us at the airport.”

“I will pull over and log in so I can download the Judge’s order. Then I will pick you up at the airport. How many are in your party?”

“Two.”

“We’ll stop at the local cop shop to pick up help. I will then help you take custody. If, after I talk to the girl, I don’t get the feeling that she’d be better off with you, I will hand you back your $50K. When do you land?”

“Thirty-five minutes, the pilot says.”

“I don’t think I can get to the airport that fast in this tank, but you shouldn’t have to wait too long.”

Lee arched her eyebrow. He switched the intercom to talk to her and said, “This lawyer’s got balls. Judge Lionel recommends her.” Jack showed her the information on his cell. Brigit started off in Mergers and Acquisitions, made a ton of money, and went into family law after a co-worker tried to adopt a baby and couldn’t. The baby in question died of neglect. She had a very autistic son and had moved to the north coast five years ago to take care of him and chase trout.

Jack made six of his calls on the way to the airport to track down an acquaintance from the Judo club. Friend was stretching it. He was an acquaintance whose company Jack enjoyed. He felt as if it was mutual, but for some reason they hadn’t taken it to the friendship level. Martin Giddings was a pathologist in private practice. He wasn’t as famous as some of the big egos in his field, but when he’d called around, Martin’s name kept coming up. He told him about Mike’s death and that they were trying to call it a suicide.

“What do I have to do to get an autopsy?”

“You don’t have to request one. In the case of apparent suicide there is always an autopsy. The coroner is required by law to order one. In the case of accidental death, if there is any doubt at all, there has to be one. Why do you doubt suicide?” he asked, his voice tired even over the phone.

It was his normal voice, one of those people who are always tired, never enjoying the pleasure of a well-rested body and mind, too certain they’d miss something in their sleep. What they missed was the rest of their lives, too rushed and tired to be in the moment. He had watched Martin in practice, giving time to the kids, being careful with his throws, a gentleman. You learn a lot about a man when you put him in a strangle hold and he has to submit.

“Dr. Giddings, Mike was checking into something he thought was illegal. The powers that be started to build a prison right next to where Mike lived. Mike was convinced the site selection process was rigged. He’d spent money, thrown lawsuits around. He did a good job and stopped the prison.”

“There’s a second reason, a stronger one. His life was a series of bitter disappointments. His daughter Heather was the light if his life. He lived for her. There is no way he’d take the easy way out and leave Heather to face life on her own. I’d like you to fly up there and do the autopsy or at least sit in on the one they are going to do. Could you, would you, do that, please? I would be happy to double your going rate.”

It had taken all those phone calls and all the sweet-talking he could muster to get through to the doc. He finally found him by talking his way into his emergency cell number. His only granddaughter was having her third birthday party. Three year olds squealed in the background, trying to please their parents by being happy about something they didn’t understand.

“I’ve watched you fight for what, three years now?” Martin asked.

“Closer to four, I think,” he answered, not knowing where Martin was going.

“During that time I’ve seen a little mean streak, a little temper.” Martin stopped — expecting an answer, he thought. He didn’t give him one. As he waited for the doc to think his way through it, he visualized Martin saying yes. Martin was just past fifty, which Jack knew because the judo club had thrown him one of many fiftieth birthday parties. He was one of those people who look like what they are. He had graying dark brown hair, calm brown eyes that reminded Jack of a beagle, with ever-present circles under. He moved gracefully and surely as if he had time to think about every movement before he made it. His thin 5’ 11” frame carried the kind of strength you only get from years of hard work.

“I’ve seen you give points away when you didn’t think you deserved them. You like what we used to call ‘fairness’ in a more innocent time.”

There was a squeal and a thud. A little voice with the music of a three-year old girl asked, “Grandpa, open presents?”

He heard the bass of Dr. Giddings muffled reply to his granddaughter, and then he said, “I will do as you ask. I don’t know the set-up there, but I’ll make some calls. Calling me in is going to raise a red flag. Should I let people know I am working for you?”

Did he want to go in big and noisy or soft and easy? “Tell them you are working for the estate, part of his recent instructions in case of his death. Hell, by the time we find his papers that might be true. I’ll have a plane waiting so you don’t have to drive up. “

“No need. I’ll fly myself into the Weaverville Airport if it’s open and into Redding if it isn’t.”

He hadn’t even known Martin was a pilot.

 

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ReKill, A Thriller by John Cameron Chapter 12

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Chapter 12

 

Mike had walked this trail so many times, his feet didn’t need to be told where to go. He was almost to the top of pass, looking forward to the easier way down, when he heard the mockingbird. He thought he knew that particular bird, but wasn’t sure. He thought the mockingbird was misnamed. There was nothing mocking in its songs. A better name for the bird would be the Tribute Band Bird. This one owned an amazing number of bird songs and other sounds. He opened the voice memo app on his iPhone and pressed record. He knew if he was still and lucky it could be long minutes before the bird finished its run and started over.

In series of three or four calls in a row, the bird ran through a symphony of raven, magpie, quail, red shouldered hawk, something that sounded an awful lot like a door hinge needing oil, a bullfrog, a hummingbird’s thrumming sound, a scrub jay and three songbirds. Something spooked the bird and it flew off to perch another hundred meters away, its songs interrupted. Mike sniffed the clean mountain air, put the phone back in his pocket, crested the only really exposed part of the trail, and started down.

Something hit him on the side of the head, knocking him to the ground. He wasn’t out completely, just stunned. A man picked him up as if he were a child and tossed him over the edge. He managed to catch his hook on a rock outcropping.

Mike looked up at the man standing over him and knew he was going to die. His face was a little too regular, his teeth too even and his chin too strong. Mike had seen enough good plastic surgery to know it when he saw it. The man wore green contacts. Looking into his eyes was like looking into an agate. There wasn’t anything human behind those eyes.

Another man stepped forward. He had the same feeling of menace. “Come on, get this done and we can get back to civilization.”

The first man looked down at him and said, “You fucking wet back. You had to stick your nose in, didn’t you? You should have known better. You pissed off the man. Now you are going to die.” With that the man smashed Mike’s hook, driving it deeper into the ground. Mike knew what was coming. He knew he didn’t have much time. He pulled the phone out of his pocket, made sure the memo recorder was still on and then put it back in his pocket, hoping the men couldn’t see him.

The first man said, “Shit,” after he realized he had simply made Mike’s hook-hold better. He moved to the side and pulled his leg back to kick Mike’s hook free. Mike grabbed the man’s trousers in his strong left hand and held on. The man shook his leg free. Mike grabbed the rock. The man smashed his foot down on his hand again and again and again until Mike couldn’t hold on any longer, then the man kicked his hook free. He slid off the edge of the cliff.

His crushed hand reached out and tried to stop his fall on a rock. He failed. As he fell the long seconds to the bottom over four hundred feet away, he reached into his pocket with his crushed hand and grabbed the phone. He ignored the pain in his hand and held on as long as he could. Right before he hit, he threw the phone so it would land in thick brush. He hit the ground at nearly one hundred miles an hour and died in a very small part of a second.

 

 

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