ReWire A Thriller Chapter 13 Professionally Edited

Chapter 13

  

Dvora Schacter, consulting choreographer and former prima ballerina, looked down at the man she had nearly fallen in love with.  She seldom took men, they were normally so weak, but this one had shone like a bright light.  It was as if he was a member of some other species.  She had watched him move through the crowd at the fund-raiser, dressed in a tuxedo.  His movement reminded her of someone and at first she couldn’t place it.  Then she remembered and laughed aloud at the incongruity of the image.  The quality of his movement reminded her of film she had seen of Fred Astaire.  Imagine a 220 pound Fred Astaire!  Even across the room he projected such a sweet combination of sadness and strength, whimsy and focus.  And, he was so very handsome.

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She had volunteered to be auctioned off at the charity willingly, without worry or remorse. She knew she was beautiful and the children’s ballet needed the money.  Everyone in the City who was of any importance knew her preferences.  Many of the bidders were what she thought of as bull dykes.  Not at all her type.  The few men who bid probably would go out with her from a sense of duty to the charity.  She could be quite charming when she chose to be.  Jack stood and watched the early bidding, amused, but not patronizing.  She made eye contact with him.  She smiled her number three smile and mouthed Bid On Me! 

The bidding was up to $6500, much too much for a whim.  One of the women still in the bidding would have been horrible dinner company.  She had inherited her money and had not been taught properly to understand the duties of wealth.  The last man dropped out and the woman smiled, if a movement underneath that much plastic surgery and Botox could be called a smile.  The bid was at $7500.

“Going once, going twice….”

“Ten thousand.”  Jack hadn’t spoken loudly yet his voice carried the room and held command.

A swarm of excited chatter flew about the room.

The harpy said, “Ten thousand five hundred!”

The man smiled again a little more broadly and said, “Eleven thousand.”

The harpy screeched “Twelve thousand!” with a look of triumph.

The man smiled like a mischievous boy, and said softly and clearly into the hushed room, “Twenty thousand.”

The glitterati roared and applauded. The harpy turned and flounced from the room.  The auctioneer smiled and said, “Twenty thousand going once, going twice, sold to… Your name, Sir?”

“Jack McDonald.”

She had been surprised often during their first date.  She had not anticipated it being so much…fun!  He was knowledgeable, educated and traveled with that kind of self-deprecating sense of humor that she liked most.  She was very attracted to him and she knew what effect she had on men and women and was sure of the effect that she had on him.  They were on their fourth date, both knowing what was sure to happen that night without speaking of it.  She was quite excited and eager-like a young girl.

A striking redhead in her early twenties, thin, with the liquid walk of someone who spent much time in a Yoga studio walked in the door and stopped scanning the room.  She waved and walked toward their table.  Jack waved, stood and hugged her and introduced Meghan to her.  Meghan was on her way to an investor meeting held over dinner and had stopped to say hi to Jack.  Dvora was smitten.  And, she was positive Meghan was smitten as well.

She and Jack finished the date.  He didn’t understand what happened when Dvora met his sister.  At first he looked confused and then was a little upset.  But, very quickly he accepted the fact and made a gallant effort to enjoy the rest of the evening.  She soon found that quality of acceptance was second nature to both Jack and Meghan.  They very quickly accepted facts, no matter how distasteful or frustrating, and moved on.

The next day she and Meghan had gone for a walk on the beach.  It lasted four hours.  They had been together since.

Jack had known Dvora loved Meghan and had graciously stepped out of the way.

Dvora reached down and brushed Jack’s cheek as he slept.  He was such a man.  She hoped this new woman was good enough for him.  He was so very sad.  It was time that he found love.

Then she thought about the love of her life lying in the ICU only feet away and thought:

I am going to kill one of the motherfuckers myself.  
 

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ReWire A Thriller Chapter 12 by John Cameron Professionally Proofed and Edited

Chapter 12

  

Her Grace sobbed.  The few tears she shed dried quickly in the thin mountain air.  A nurse entered the great room, bowed respectfully and asked:

“Your Grace, may I help in any way?”

Her Grace realized this was the last chance the doctor would give her to get her emotions under control.  She agreed with the doctor.  The Church could not afford to lose her now.  None of the others had her combination of courage, conviction and ability.

“No, my dear.  I am simply saddened.  Tell the doctor I’ll be fine now,” she answered as kindly as she could.

“Please repeat command?” the computer asked, its mechanical voice sounding almost humble.

“Compose reply,” she said.

“Do you wish to compose a reply,” The computer asked?

“Yes,” After ten minutes of weary effort she had composed the reply. When translated it would say:

You have been given another chance at redemption. Continue with your work.

She pushed thought of the man’s failure out of her mind for a moment, told the computer to disconnect itself from the network and laboriously instructed the computer to open the jump drive in the USB port.  At least some of their projects were bearing fruit.  The riot had resulted in the destruction of the laboratory that had caused them so much trouble.  It had been easy for her agents to infiltrate and incite the animal rights group.  Because of their fanatic love for soulless animals, there was no way the activity would be connected to the Church.  They were fools, she thought.  How should medical research be conducted-on their children?  She would not object if they were children of atheists, Jews or Muslims.

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One of their pet politicians had succeeded in pressuring the FDA into even more Byzantine rules that would make it nearly impossible for these agents of the devil to tamper with her savior’s work.  She watched the video of his speech from the house floor.  He had spoken with such conviction and power about the need for safety.  His eyes had burned bright as he wove his web of lies about contaminated cultures and genetically altered crops mutating.  He was a major power on the congressional committee that controlled government grants to biotech research labs. The voting populus was so ignorant that many believed he had their interests at heart.  She quickly read another article and then stopped and smiled.

The politician had assured her that the new law giving the federal government even more authority in its fight against terrorism would help them.  And now, he was proving to be right.  Much of the research done in biotech could be spun to appear to be a risk as a possible bioweapon.  This had given Homeland Security the in it needed to monitor and, in many cases guide research.  Promising lines of research were being stalled and in some cases funding cut or the programs shut down because they weren’t secure.  Her laboratory was being left completely alone and funding increased.  The Sword of God was being fully funded with a few simple keystrokes on an accounting system.

Once she was done counting their victories, she told the computer to disconnect the jump drive and had one of her aides remove it and put it in the safe.  Her thoughts returned to this new instrument their savior had supplied.  This man they provided for her was a good tool.  This man who had failed, believed, wanted, and had the will.  He was also able to carry out the parts of his task that were most distasteful and difficult.  The man had to be taught new skills.  She had watched the progress reports as the man went through training.  It was not a question of physical skill.  The man was powerful and strong.  His foot, deformed at birth, had not been a source of weakness, but of strength.

His head injury made him nearly emotionless, which was so important now.  At first, she had doubted her agent’s reports that some of the enemy could read minds.  This was blasphemy.  Her savior was the only one who could see into the minds and hearts of men.  Then they showed her highly classified government documents.  It was true.  A new scourge of the devil placed on her children.  Some men and women were able to read the feelings of others.  And a very few could read actual thoughts.  It was times like these that she wished she could still cross herself: Some could move objects with their minds.  These were surely the children of the devil.  It made this man’s robot-like nature very important.  He was a cipher even to these children of the devil.

The man did not have the technical skills to avoid electronic surveillance.  He only had rudimentary computer skills.  He had struggled.  His lack of formal education should have made it impossible for him to succeed.  He succeeded by working for days on end with little rest.  He triumphed by asking many questions, and, even more important, making sure he understood the answers.  He succeeded by reading three books to explain the one assigned.  The man succeeded in his preparation by force of will.

She thought again about how close they had been to success with the first one on the list.  A few more minutes would have been enough.  The man she used had prepared and watched and waited.  The Church had provided him with information that was most thorough and completely accurate.  No one but the Church could have acquired such information.

The Church sent only rudimentary information, and that in code, by any electronic method.  The full report would be written by hand and delivered by messenger who would memorize the report, destroy it and deliver it.  There would be no trail hidden in the black powder on paper from a printer.  There would be no electronic scent left on a hard drive that someone might forget to empty, fill with ones and zeros and then destroy.  Pen and paper would give her the details. She believed that when she saw the full details she would know the man had done everything and more that was necessary to succeed.

It was simply a matter of happenstance.  Perhaps, somewhere in the back of her mind, in some small corner, there might have once been a doubt.  A tiny flicker of doubt about their righteousness crept into her heart.  Perhaps they were not ordained to succeed?  She discovered this tiny flicker of doubt and crushed it as her father had crushed her soul in those dark and sweaty nights she remembered so fondly.

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ReWire a Thriller by John Cameron Chapter 11

Chapter 11

 

Captain Alvin Yan retraced the thieves’ steps.  He walked up to the exterior door and opened it.  His street cops had seen him recreate criminals’ activities before. They watched him eagerly hoping they would absorb some of his skill.  He walked in and placed the empty toolbox he carried on the floor.  He reached out gloved hands to move the access panel.  He fiddled with wires and then put the panel back in place.  He walked to the stairwell and took the stairs two at a time, arriving at the top with slightly labored breathing.  Within seconds, his breathing returned to normal.

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He referred to the notes on his iPad and walked to the apartment, opened the door, walked to the closet and pushed the coat aside.  He popped the panel, messed with wires, put the panel back and then followed his detective’s script of the crime scenario.  He pretended to pick up the two laptops and the two external hard drives.  Yan followed the script through from beginning to end from the stairs to the door twice.  He followed the script in the apartment four times.

He stood over the mannequin lying where Meghan McDonald had lain.  He carefully reviewed his notes.  Then he kicked the mannequin.  He first kicked right footed from the left side of the body.  Then he kicked left footed from the right side of the body.  Then he stomped on the left arm right-footed.  He referred to his notes again and sat in the chair next to the dressing table.  After a few minutes he said quite clearly, but not at all loudly, “bull pucky.”

Seconds later a huge police sergeant walked silently into the room to stand slightly behind him.

Alvin Yan said, “Rudy, would you please get my crime scene team back out here.  Let them know that now would be a good time for them to be here and that I am not upset, simply very curious about a few anomalies.”

“Yes, Sir,” said the Sergeant in his mellifluous voice and speed dialed the head of the crime scene team.

Yan sat in the chair going over the notes on physical evidence and inventory, checking and rechecking.  He called his wife, “Sweetheart, I am afraid I shall be late for dinner again.  Have you started cooking yet?”

He listened to the answer and said, “Then why don’t we meet at the Fire Dragon at around nine? Excellent!”  He reread the information on his iPad and read through the information another time.  Then he read it again.  The third time, he made copious notes.

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ReWire Chapter 8 Professionally Proofed and Edited

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Chapter 8

 

 

The phone in Jack and Dvora’s new room went through the hospital switch.  Saying anything important on it would be like posting it to his blog.  They wouldn’t let him use his mobile, one of the last hospitals to keep that silly rule.  He knew the equipment in the hospital was shielded well enough.  Sometimes rules were just rules.  While he stayed in their house, he lived by their rules.  He called his mobile’s voice mail from the landline.  There were so many messages.  One was from Lee!  She had been crying.  Maybe she could teach him how.

Lee had left a different number than her mobile.  The number rang three times before a slight pause and then two more different rings as she picked up.  He could hear faint traffic noise in the background.

“Baby, I’m so very sorry about Meghan.  How is she?”

He told Lee as much as he knew, trying not to shade the facts in any way.

“Is there anything I can do?”

He said, “I wish, I mean, I guess…” he didn’t know how to ask, even if he could ask.  Would it scare her and push her away or…?

Lee said, “I know we are not together yet.  Yet! Listen to me. I know I am assuming a lot.  I know I should be there, be with you, help you, hold you. I mean…I think, do you want me to…?”

“I was thinking when, not if, too.  Please come. Come quickly.”

It took long minutes to say good-bye.  Knowing she was on her way was the food and sleep he hadn’t had.

Jack had known Hong Lee for seven years.  She was the main reason he’d found so many other reasons to do business with the old boys in Hong Kong.

Years ago, when Lee was still working on her MBA, she had interned at DealMaker.  The other partners handled interns then.  He talked to Lee by email and they played phone tag.  The picture of her was hot, but pictures lie.  The boys said the pictures didn’t do her justice, but she was barely twenty-three then, and Jack was only thirty-three.

Jack and Lee both did impressions.  One of Jack’s best was Forest Gump.  Lee’s best was Joan Bond or Sheena Connery, according to her.  Jack laughed out loud the first time he heard a woman, native language Cantonese, do James Bond.  One day he walked into the meeting room in the old offices on Powell.

She turned and introduced herself saying, “Ah, Agent Gump, at last we meet.  My name is Bond, Joan Bond.”

Later he thought he blushed a little.  He knew she did.  He kept her at arm’s length, despite her best efforts.  Now he was just forty and she had crossed the magical age of thirty.  He gifted himself the memories of the way she looked, smelled, and felt at the party in Hong Kong.  Had it only been a hundred hours ago?

It was past two when the party wound down, most of the guests heading for their homes in the hills or city nearby.  Many who had traveled from the People’s Republic stayed in guest suites.  Lee and Jack walked onto the deck.  It was cool in the highlands, but the bottled gas heaters kept it comfortable, the dense shrubbery shielding the wind.  They stood side by side. She chose his left side, knowing somehow he felt more comfortable with her there.

Lee moved closer to Jack.  Her dress brushed against his slacks.  They looked down at the view of the harbor and city below.  Some trick of wind cleared the smog from the air.  Hues were bright enough for one of those old-fashioned, colorized postcards. Even at this hour many lights were still on in the office towers.  The harbor was busy with traffic.

Guards withdrew to a discreet distance, sent by a signal from Lee Jack wasn’t supposed to see.  She walked away, reaching back a gentle hand to pull him along.  She stood backlit by the gentle light of a lantern, this one orange.  Lee wore what looked like a traditional Chinese dress, bone white, covering her from ankle to half way up her neck.  Traditionally, the Chinese wore more than a thong under their traditional dresses.  She stood hip-shot, every exciting curve hidden and at the same time accentuated by the light, the dress and the moment.

Jack’s heart pounded like a bad bearing in a pump.  He heard rushing like water through rusty pipes.  He had to remember to breathe and when he did her scent filled him.  The light glistened from Lee’s hair, shimmering.

Jack reached out his left hand and brushed hair away from Lee’s face.  She pushed her cheek into his hand making a purring sound deep in her throat.  He draped his arm around her and pulled her to his side as they enjoyed the night.

Later she turned, pressed a firm breast into his arm, looked up with liquid invitation, and asked, “Well?”

He had said “no” for too many years.  They both said “yes” to many things that night.

 

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ReWire Chapter 10, Now Professionally Proofed and Edited

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Chapter 10

Jack surveyed their new room.  The pastel colors, from the soft green of the homey looking furniture to the peach walls, made the room look welcoming, peaceful.  The beds, under the understated designer spreads, were fully functional hospital beds.  He used the remotes to shift the beds up and down at the head, then in the middle, and finally, at the feet.  A different orderly pushed Dvora in through the open door as he played with the beds.  He made the beds wave before he dropped the controls on the nightstand.

“I understand we’re renting a room,” Dvora said as the orderly left.

“That’s almost right.  I’m renting a room.  It has two beds.  You can use one of them if you’d like. You don’t snore, do you?” He asked.

“How can you make fucking jokes?”

Later he thought it was not an unreasonable question. “I can joke because if I don’t, I will break down.  I have to stay sane until I catch the motherfuckers that tried to kill Meghan.  Then I will snap their necks like fucking twigs.  After that I don’t care.  Is that better than joking?”

Dvora cowered in the wheelchair, trying to get away from him.  He didn’t realize how much he’d raised his voice until one of the nurses opened the door and told him to shut the hell up or leave.

He turned and walked away from her, saying, “I’m sorry.  I didn’t mean to take it out on you.  It’s just that…”

“…it hurts so bad.” She said exactly what he was going to say, right when he was going to say it.  He turned and walked slowly toward her.  She held out her hand and asked, “Truce?”

He took her hand, “Truce.  How’s she doing?”

“The same. I feel as if I should be with her, but it hurts so much just to look at her and I don’t think she knows.”  Dvora got out of her wheelchair with a wince and gently lowered herself into one of the visitor’s chairs, a good Queen Anne copy.  He avoided talk by taking an interest in one of the smaller pictures on the wall.  He was right.  A Joseph Bellacera print.  He owned four originals bought so long ago that he wasn’t wealthy, and didn’t need to be, when he paid cash for them.  The other prints didn’t clash too badly with furniture, fixtures and paint.  All the empty patient beds in the City had finally gotten the attention of hospital marketing types.  He was doing everything he could think of to avoid thinking and feeling about his sister.

“How did you get them to rent us a room?” she asked.

“I name-dropped two board members I know pretty well. Then I wondered aloud how they’d feel when they heard the administrator wasn’t willing to take risk-free money.  I didn’t even have to go into the ‘personal favor to a friend of most of the board’ part of the sales presentation.  I’d be happy to have you share the rent.  While you were in with Meghan, I checked the front desk.  There are about sixty messages.  Would you like to work with me on a first draft for a press release, or do you want to do it on your own?”

They roughed out the statement and forwarded it to DealMaker’s PR department.  Their PR department was Olga Boginskaya, former disinformation specialist for the KGB.  Handling personal communications wasn’t remotely part of her job description, but Olga loved Meghan like the little sister she never had and one of their many messages had been Olga’s offer to help.

Then, Jack returned Bob White’s call.

“How is she?” Bob asked.

Jack told him.  It didn’t get any easier with telling.

“Jack, I am so sorry we let you down.  There should not have been any way for someone to hack that system without us knowing.”

“Bobby, you know that any technology made by man can be beaten by other men.  If you hadn’t insisted on the panic buttons, they would have both been dead now for sure.”

Bob said, “I will pray for Meghan on my knees tonight and every night until she is home safe and well.”

When he could find his voice, Jack thanked Bob and said, “Bobby, I think Meghan’s spirits would be considerably improved by company.  I’d like you to send some boys and girls over.”

Bob asked, “Do you want this to be a surprise or do you want everyone to know about the party?”

“I’d like it to be a surprise,” he said.

The high-pitched whine on the line stopped. “The line shows clean now, Jack.  Are you too close to this for your gift to be working right?”

Jack checked the quiet place inside where his gift lived.  The feeling said Meghan was in danger from without as well as within.

Jack said, “The feeling is strong and I believe it is true.”

“Do we have knowledge certain of these surprise guests?” Bob asked.

“No.  The cops went political and put Captain Yan on the case. He’ll be pissed, but he’s supposed to be the best.  I’ll tell him you’re acting as my agent.”

“No, Jack.  The police do not like private security anywhere near capital crimes.  Because of who you, Dvora, and Meghan are, this case is very political.  Yan hates politics.  You listen to the Captain, ask good questions, and remember things.  Now, to get help within an hour, I have to sign off.  I’ll send three with the usual identifiers within minutes.  Jack, you said Captain Yan is supposed to be the best.  There is no doubt in my mind.  He is the best by far.  My prayers are with you and yours.”

Jack and Robert E. Lee White went back nineteen years.  They met the first time at a military hospital in Germany, both there for some repair work.  Jack’s problem was simple.  His A-team was dressed native, so no flak vests.  Jack took shrapnel in his back trying to burrow into the ground during a mortar attack.  Little pieces of metal worked their way toward his spine. The doctors had pulled out what they could.  Jack had been given a lifetime sentence of pain.  There was also a chance that one of the little pieces of sharp metal would work its way into his spine and paralyze him.  No one was ready to tell him what the odds were of that happening.  The worst part of his time in the hospital had been assimilating that fact into his being.

Bob’s problem was more severe. Bob had taken a round in the knee in the same firefight that killed the last of his brothers in a ranger patrol.  Bob had crawled through enemy territory alone, with his injury.  He’d lain mostly submerged in a muddy ditch for two days and nights making no sound.  The ditch was a sauna in the day and crusted with ice at night. Then Bob crawled more miles over more days and nights to a place where he could get dusted off without capture.  By the time they pulled him out, and in spite of his most excellent self-administered medical care, Bob’s leg smelled too ripe. They tried to take it off in a field hospital.

Bob had been third in the eight hundred meters in Division 2 in college.  In order to get dusted off, he’d ambushed a colonel and taken his satellite phone.  He had the Republican Guard colonel’s little PSM pistol when the chopper picked him up.  Despite the fever, his hand was steady enough to keep the pistol pointed at the doc’s head as he worked on Bob’s leg without anesthetic.  Eventually the area commander came in and promised they wouldn’t take his leg.  Only then did he let them give him morphine.

Jack and Bob met again years later at UC Davis Medical Center.  Bob was in for a seventh operation on his leg.  Jack was in for another fishing expedition for shrapnel in his back.  They were both a touch morose, and decided a trip to Vegas would help.  Occasionally, Jack had to carry Bob.  They came back three days later after a fine time. They’d gotten inside each other’s heads in those three days.  Bob had made his mark in corporate security.  Jack had made a few good decisions on stocks and some other things, so he needed Bob’s help more every year.  Rangers had to be smart, unbelievably tough, brave, and patient.  Bob was more Ranger than any man Jack knew, Distinguished Service Cross, purple hearts, useless leg and all.

Jack thought more about Bob, the best man he knew, and then he walked to the SICU to check on Meghan.  Dvora sat in the chair on the right in the near corner, staring into space, feet tucked under, hugging herself with folded arms.  She twirled hair around her right index finger to pull it to her mouth.  The wisps of loose hair above her long neck, the way her back looked, trying to be so straight and strong, no matter what, tugged at his heart.

Jack floated away and marched back in noisy approach.

Dvora smiled a little at him as he walked in.  He sat next to her, reaching out a hand.  She took it, shyly like a first date in junior high, and then gripped his hand fiercely as they sat watching Meghan. She looked as if the fight to live was eating her alive from the inside out.

Jack used to sit for many hours watching Meghan when she was a baby.  He’d walk into her room at night after Mom and Pop passed out, to keep watch as she slept.  Meghan had looked so innocent and peaceful lying there.  She had maintained that innocence as an adult.

One day a few years ago, Meghan and Jack met by accident at the airport. They were going in opposite directions on the same airline, leaving at about the same time.  They waited in a bar, chatting.  National news was on one of the TVs.  Another serial killer led.  This one killed baby girls, and then took them apart or, according to one so-called expert, took them apart and, in doing so, killed them.

Jack watched Meghan watching the story.  Her expression wasn’t disgust or hatred.  He couldn’t read her at all-at least at first. Then he knew.  Meghan felt confusion.  He could nearly hear Meghan saying to herself, I must be seeing this wrong.  This can’t happen in my world. 

Meg gave her head a shake and turned to him, excited as a child as she described the paper she was to give in Montreal.  He remembered that look of innocent denial.  If Meghan lived, that innocent part of her might be dead.

He thought about the men who’d almost killed his sister and what they might be doing right now.  One might be enjoying a good meal or worrying about the strange new sound his car was making.  Another could wonder if he had remembered to pay his utility bill.  Perhaps one was thinking about how sexy the weather woman was on channel 9.  They would be thinking about anything and everything except what they should be thinking about.  They should be thinking about being dead.

Meghan’s left foot twitched and an alarm went off.  More nurses came running.  Jack and Dvora tried to stay, but they kicked them out.  They waited in the hall as Dr. Kramer ran in.  Twenty minutes later the doctor came out of the room.

“Good news and bad news,” she said.  “The good news is twitching left foot.  The twitch is another signal her nervous system is trying to rewire itself.  The bad news is pneumonia, I think.  She is at risk to all sorts of secondary infections because of her injuries.”  The doctor’s beeper went off and she jogged away yelling she would keep them informed.

Jack and Dvora waited while pneumonia took hold and watched as Meghan tried to fight it.  They waited as Meghan went into shock from an allergy to the antibiotic nobody knew she had an allergy to.  Too many times Jack saw the forced smiles on nurses’ and doctors’ faces.  The staff did not quite make eye contact as they stared at a point on Jack’s forehead.  Even without the visual clues their feelings were palpable.  They expected Meghan to die.

His sister Meghan hardly ever did what anyone expected.  Around what should have been dinnertime of the next day, her fight paid off.  She beat the shock caused by the allergy to the antibiotic.  She finally held her own against the pneumonia.  Dvora slumped, at last allowing herself sleep, in the chair in the hall next to his.  He stood with great effort, turned and took first steps toward their room.  He stopped, walked back and scooped Dvora up.  She stirred, moaned and shook her head, then settled, face snuggled into his neck as if she were a sleepy child.  He carried her back to their room.

He softly lay her down on the bed he’d picked for himself, the one nearer the door, turned the comforter back on hers, and gently placed her on it.  It was cool in their room.  He reached down to cover her, and stopped.  This was the first time he’d ever watched her sleep.  She looked almost ordinary while sleeping.  Dvora was beautiful, but her beauty came from power, character, and grace, all disguised now by sleep.  Her high-speed engine was on idle.  It wasn’t that many years ago he’d cursed the day he’d introduced her to his sister.

When Jack closed his eyes and pictured the woman beside him walking up the back trail to Nevada Falls, it wasn’t her.  The woman was Lee.  He missed her so much.  For a moment he had been sure he smelled Lee’s scent.

He walked into the bathroom, closed the door and turned on the shower.  Other than keeping her safe, he couldn’t do much for Meghan’s physical health.  The rest was up to her incredible will, luck, and the medical staff.  He could do something about her financial health.  Their parent’s bad luck, bad training, and bad habits kept them poor.

He and Meghan had grown up without most things others took for granted.  Somehow they’d both overcome the scarcity mentality.  Living wealthy was a whole lot healthier and a hell of a lot more fun than living beat-down and poor.  He was damn sure ReWire was having serious problems.  He didn’t know what made him sure.  He trusted his instincts as well as his special talent.  He had to hedge Meghan’s investment in the company.  He thought about her boss.

O’Hare.  He had thought about the man’s thinning hair when he’d committed the name to memory.  The man tried to hide thinning, reddish-blond hair with hundred-dollar haircuts and too much product.  O’Hare’s teeth were creamy yellow like many redheads, his complexion splotchy. He had been a good amateur boxer in his youth and was still a workout fanatic.  Donald was only a couple inches shorter than he was, but a lot leaner, around one sixty or so, with that arrogance some little people have around someone who’s got decent mass.

He had interviewed O’Hare when ReWire recruited Meghan.  His sister had still been in her master’s program.  O’Hare was one of those fast-talking boys from New York, the fellows who think if they talk loud and long enough you’ll do what they want. He pumped Jack for information on one of DealMaker’s projects.  They were a small piece of financing for a plant in Taiwan. Some of their product line was suitable for genetic engineering assembly lines.  He didn’t trust O’Hare, told Meghan he didn’t, and recommended against the company because of it.

Then Jack met the man who was going to be her immediate boss, Dr. William “Wild Bill” Smith.  He was a curmudgeon and long overdue a shot at a Nobel.  He was an outspoken critic of the greenhouse gas thing so he never got the shot he deserved.  Smith had the balls to tell O’Hare to take a hike and owned enough stock for it to carry weight.  Jack still didn’t trust O’Hare.

He shivered and looked down at his soapy hands.  They were blue.  He rinsed the off the soap.  Still blue.  He had been standing under a cold shower for long minutes without knowing.   His teeth chattered as shivers rocked his body.  He slowly turned up the hot water.  He knew he had numbed himself.  He hadn’t realized how much-until now.  He hadn’t realized how hard life was going to be.

He slid down the wall to the floor.  Pounding jets of water beat his back like a whip.  He rolled to his side as he hugged himself.  He held his hand over his mouth to keep from waking Dvora.  He reached to turn on more hot water when the door opened.

Dvora looked down, her eyes bloodshot, and her hair flat and greasy.  She held the door to steady herself.  She straightened, her motor coming back on as she asked, “You aren’t made of steel, are you?”

He tried to talk, to stand, to do something.  With superhuman effort he sat up.  She left and came back with a pile of fluffy, white towels.  She turned off the water with an elbow, and gently patted him dry.  With her lifting, he slowly stood.  She tied a towel around his waist and draped another across his shoulders.  She led him out of the bathroom with her left hand on his left elbow and her right hand on top of his right shoulder, helping him along to the chair by his bed.

He sat.  His head rolled on his neck.  She pressed the water out of his hair, towel-dried it with firm, gentle pats and combed it out.  He didn’t remember shampooing his hair, but must have because it squeaked clean.  He enjoyed the hair care, but flinched when she appeared with his razor, cup, and brush.  Steam rising above the foam made a little mirage, confusing colors on the wall.

“After father had his second stroke, I shaved him every day,” she said as she gently tilted his head back and carefully placed a hot, moist towel on his face.  He tried to relax and breathed in steam.  She did a great job shaving him, better than he did when he hurried some days.

Dvora moved around to the back of the chair and stood holding him, rocking.  Later, she woke him enough to help him to bed.

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ReWire A Thriller

Chapter 9

 

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Hong Lee made herself a promise.  She would help her man do whatever needed to be done.  Those jhew lun dou tried to kill her man’s sister!  His heart had needed to be broken again and again until it was open enough to let her in.  Now it was open, and she was ready and he was ready and now this.  When she was a teenager and the fortune-teller said she would fall in love and marry a gwai lo later in life she had nearly slapped the bitch.

As a dutiful granddaughter, Lee had gone to school in Switzerland and then gone to the States, to Stanford.  When grandfather wanted her to intern at a small private firm rather than a large international trading company, she had been prepared to argue and argue fiercely.  She had been so disappointed with the first two she had interviewed.  Then she had walked into DealMaker’s old offices on Powell Street.  The men and women there were like warriors from another era.  At the same time, they had an astonishing understanding of technology as a tool.

She hadn’t even met Jack McDonald until after she had worked there for three months.  She heard war stories and tall tales of his exploits.  She had looked at his pictures on the web and in the company literature.  At first she had doubted the veracity of many of the tales.  Then she heard him described by a competitor as “virtuous.” Lee had hid behind cap and sunglasses to attend one of his Judo tournaments.  Jack truly was a warrior and so very sad and such a man.

Lee still remembered hearing his voice behind her and turning to meet his eyes in the conference room at the old offices on Powell.  It had taken every ounce of will she had not to leap on him.  She knew she had blushed.  The fortune-teller was right.  Then she found out he was smitten with that gold-digging bitch.  She pondered long and hard about what to do to break them up.  She thought for moments about having one of grandfather’s assassins visit the woman in the night.  But, she knew Jack would find out and hate her.  She also knew he was still too broken and it would take more pain for him to gather the pieces together and be whole and ready for her.  So she waited.

The limo driver locked up his brakes.  Lee’s seatbelt kept her safely in place as she watched the Palomino Blackwing pencil roll off her notepad onto the floor.  The intercom buzzed.  “Excuse me, Ma’am.  There has been an accident and we are simply not going to make your flight.  I do apologize.  What would you like me to do?”

Dew ne loh mah!” Hong Lee, scion of one of the wealthiest families in Hong Kong, graduate of the finest Swiss boarding schools and near the top of her class in Stanford’s MBA program, cussed like a drunken sailor and thought, I will help him find and kill these sons-of-bitches.  How dare they!

Into the intercom, she said: “You certainly do not have any control over the traffic.  Please take me back to the hotel.”  She held her hand, palm down, in the air over where she believed the pencil to be, closed her eyes and breathed in and out.  With her exhale, the pencil rose through the air and pressed against her open palm.  She closed her hand and opened her eyes, breathing in again and thought.

I am going to personally kill at least one of the scum who tried to kill my man’s sister.

She turned her yellow legal pad to a new page and wrote at the top:

 

What can I do to help?

 

  1. Emotional support
  2. Physical support
  3. Financial help
  4. Intelligence/information
  5. Influence
  6. People
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Chapter 7

Her Grace willed her left hand to move enough to grasp the joystick on her powered wheelchair.  At first her hand didn’t move at all.  Then it flapped like a fish gasping for water.  In her exhausted frustration she let emotions drive up her blood pressure.  Before she could use her iron will to soothe and calm herself, her doctor strode back into the room.

“Your Grace, we can’t afford to lose you.  If I see another spike in your blood pressure today, I will be forced to sedate you.  Please, please, rest?”

Her Grace fought the urge to lash out at the doctor.  She smiled, still able to control her facial muscles, and forced herself to relax.  The doctor checked her catheter, made sure the colostomy bag was empty, and left.  She faced the indignities with calm, and maintained the calm state for minutes after the doctor left, making herself relax even more.  She brought up pleasant memories from her childhood.

She and Poppa would often go to baseball games together.  Her older sisters were probably out fornicating.  She and Poppa had a special, secret bond.  She knew that thinking of their special times together, at home in the evenings with no one around, would most certainly raise her blood pressure. She thought instead of those baseball games.  Even as a child she often became frustrated by some problem or task and let herself became angry.  Poppa would quote one of his baseball heroes-George Brett.

You don’t get hits by trying hard.  You get hits by trying easy.

She tried easy, picturing her left hand becoming still and then slowly, ever so slowly, moving to grasp the joystick on the arm of the powered chair.  She watched her left hand grasp the stick and tilt it slightly forward.  She heard the click of the servos and the hum of the motor.  Her Grace felt the chair move slowly forward across the smooth parquet floor.  She maneuvered the chair into place in her computer enclosure.  The huge screen contained very few lines of print and those were in 30-point type.

“Open email!” she said in her angelic voice.

The computer questioned quietly in its robotic voice, as if it were ashamed to speak.

“Do you want to open email?”

“Yes,” she said, even the one-syllable word a musical note.

Her email program opened with a password form.

“Let me in!” she said. The computer asked her to confirm.  She did as she was asked.

The first email had an invisibletrail.net address.  She recognized it and eagerly said: “Open first new message!”

She read the first few lines with excitement.  She translated the code quickly.  A single tear rolled down her smooth cheek, then another tear, and another as she sobbed and sniffed.

“Please repeat command?” The computer asked.

She ignored the computer and the beauty she could only see as a blur through the window. She continued to cry.

“Please repeat command?” The computer asked.

“Please repeat command?” The computer asked.

“Please repeat command?” The computer asked.

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Chapter 6

 

Jack looked down at his little sister and remembered.  He felt her tiny weight as he carried her on his shoulders, remembered her first sunburn as he taught her to swim, felt such pride as he watched in amazement while she learned math as she was learning to walk.  He reached out with his inside touch and asked her to respond.  He felt nothing at first, and then he felt that special warmth he felt when they connected.  Not like before, but still there.  Much of her essence was still alive.  He knew it.  At least he hoped he knew it, hoped he wasn’t just hoping, telling himself lies.

Jack and Dvora waited through the rest of the night.  The nurses kicked them out of Meghan’s room to change her dressings, so they moved to the waiting room.

Somewhere in the small hours of the morning, the feeling came to him.  The attack on Meghan was part of something else.  Not just random violence, or thieves’ frustration, but something more.  He didn’t know what it was a part of, but he’d learned to trust his gift.  As Deepak Chopra once said “Our guts have been giving us information for millions of years longer than our brains, and our guts haven’t yet learned how to doubt themselves.”

He left the room and asked an aide to find the head administrator.  Allison Palmer-Chung was that sort. Competitive, tough, straight-talking, the kind that have to prove they are as strong as a man.  Allison was maybe fifty under the suit, tight and fit from hours in the gym, careful diet, and a few strategic nips and careful tucks.

He said, “I’ve noticed you have many empty rooms.”

Allison said, “Yes, we do.” Tiny, hidden cautions chased each other around her face.

“I would like to use an empty room for the next few nights to be near my sister.  I would, of course, move out instantly if you needed it for someone who was ill or injured. I will pay the standard billable rate, including upkeep and less any charges associated for health care and monitoring.”

The uncertainties disappeared into narrowed eyes, and crossed arms.  “I am afraid I couldn’t possibly do that.  It is inappropriate for us to turn the hospital into a…hotel.”

She stretched the last word out and managed to say it while looking up at him and down her nose at the same time.

He smiled gently and made soft eye contact as he asked, “Mrs. Palmer-Chung — is it okay if I call you Allison?”

“Yes,” said her mouth.

“Allison.  I absolutely agree with you.  It would be a terrible thing to turn your magnificent hospital into a …hotel.  And, I know that maybe $4,000 a day would drop to your bottom line by allowing us to stay in an otherwise empty room.  I am sure Dorothy Jones-Hadad and Shzi Lui-Mao, among others on your board, would appreciate anything, even something slightly out of the ordinary, which would drop dollars directly to your bottom-line.  And, at no risk to you or your hospital!  My rider will cover any perceived insurance liabilities.  I am so very tired, worried sick, and need so little from you.  Let’s take care of this right now.  Which is the room closest to the SICU that would impact you the least?”

Allison smiled with her mouth, hated him with her eyes, and instantly agreed. Name-dropping two of the hospital’s board members had been effective.  If it was Jack’s hospital and somebody turned down $4,000 free dollars a day, he would have been pissed.  He knew many powerful people, some of them friends.  He would call in all his markers and run his friendship debt to the limit until Meghan was home and safe.  He would not stop until he had squeezed the life out of the men who had nearly killed his sister.

 

 

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Chapter 5

The man knelt on the floor next to his bed. He had knelt for a very long time.  This was as it should be.  His knees were beyond pain now.  The man wasn’t a burglar by trade.  His art had been that of an enforcer.  He had studied hard for this first mission and had done well, even with all the technical parts. He used all the information they gave him, and studied even more.  He’d taken special care to avoid detection.  He had neutralized the complex burglar alarm.  The man had entered the place at exactly the right time. Still, he had failed.

He had done the right thing in leaving when the panic alarm sounded.  He knew it was more important to stop the rest of them than to stop the first one if it meant he got caught.  He was sure the first one would not be a threat after his work.  But the man also knew his superiors would judge his first mission a failure.  He hoped he would be allowed to continue his mission, but the man thought the odds were against him. This is why he prayed.  He believed in prayer.

The man pushed himself to his feet.  At first his legs would not hold him.  Eventually, he was able to stand, and not so long after, walk across to the little chest of drawers.  He put on his disguise and the cheap, no-name clothes he’d bought at the thrift store.  The man walked down the back stairs of the rooming house into the blowing San Francisco night.  It was eight blocks to the Internet café.

Walking eight blocks — walking anywhere not watched by the fucking screws — was a dream he wouldn’t have allowed himself three years ago.  Even with his foot, he loved to walk, at least when he was on the outside.

He walked nearly twenty blocks to make sure he was not followed.  By the time he arrived, his knees hurt much less.  Now he could feel the pain in his foot.

At the café, he told the clerk he wanted a booth in the back — one with sides.  The clerk didn’t even smirk.  Kinky porn was the new normal.  The man did not care what the clerk thought, but did not want to be memorable.

He had to wait for a booth.  He paid cash for the sign-on and ordered a coffee to give the clerk something to do other than watch.  “I would like an Americano, extra hot, plenty of room for milk.” He sat at a corner table and read the Chronicle until his booth came open.

As he stood and walked toward the booth. A young man, tatted up, beefy and pretty, tried to slip into the booth ahead of him.

The man placed his arm in front of the youth.  The youth turned his startling green eyes, as empty of expression as ice cubes, toward the man and fluttered his lashes.  Something the pretty boy saw in the man’s eyes made him stop, turn and leave the café.

The man logged onto one Internet account, through another Internet account, through his invisibletrail.net account.  It took a very long time to construct his message.  The message appeared to be a discussion of certain passages in the Bible.  The man used the long memorized code to painstakingly build his message of failure, and asked permission to continue his quest.  He promised to stop the second sinner’s attempt to interfere with their savior’s work within three weeks.

 

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                                                                 Chapter 4

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Jack and Dvora sat, not talking much at all, until eleven that night when another nurse walked into the room.  The nurse’s nametag said Smith, Mary, RN, BSN.  She was maybe forty, with worry lines around her eyes and deep laugh lines around her mouth.  Mary looked bone-weary, but her big, light-green eyes were alert and caring.  It was Mary’s job to tell them nothing.

“Dr. Kramer asked me to speak to you.  She is the thoracic surgeon in charge of the team caring for Ms. McDonald.  Doctor asked me to tell you that Ms. McDonald is finally stable.  Doctor will be in to talk to you as soon as possible.  There was a terrible multiple-car accident and Doctor had to rush to another operating room. I am so sorry about Ms. McDonald.”

Nurse Smith smiled and turned to leave in her sensible, white shoes.  Jack asked himself what it would be like to go through life as Mary Smith. He needed to find out.  He had to show Mary Smith that he cared about her.  Caring was easy.  Not caring was something he could be better at.  Then some of the nightmares might stop.

Jack and Mary were of an age.  Their worlds had been shaped by many of the same forces.

Jack slid in front of Mary, gently blocking her way to the door.

Some people called what Jack did hypnosis. His ex-wife called his skills “manipulation,” on the infrequent good days when they were in love.  Most of the time, they had been in hate, and she called what he did “mind control.”

When Meghan was a very little girl, she used to say he cast spells.  Sometimes, the spells worked.

Jack matched Mary’s body language and breathing, willing his heartbeat to correspond with hers.  When he spoke, it was in the same pattern, using words similar to words she used, at the same decibel level, and in the same cadence.

Humans are comfortable and open with the familiar.  People are startled when they hear their own voices recorded, after years hearing the same voice through the filter of cartilage, flesh and bone.  Yet, they are nurtured when they hear a voice that sounds near their own.

“Nurse Smith. Mary? Please?  You have a feeling about how my sister is doing.  You would want to know, wouldn’t you, if it was your baby sister, the sister you raised after your parents died? Is it as bad as it sounds-worse?  Please, extend me the courtesy you would want if we traded places.  Will she live, do you think?”

Jack stood in relaxed confidence, willing Mary to answer his questions, trying to hear the answer before it left her mouth.

Mary looked into some distant place.

“I don’t know,” Mary said.  “Meghan must be much tougher than she looks to have survived.  So she has a chance. If she is lucky enough and tough enough, then there is a chance.  If she wants to live badly enough, if some part of her deep inside her knows enough to want to live, then she has a chance.”

Mary stared at Jack for another few heartbeats, and then, with a start, looked around as if seeing the room for the first time.  She gave herself a little shake.  She drew back, straightened, broke eye contact, and said in a louder, sharper voice: “I shouldn’t have said anything.  Please, I am not the doctor.  I wasn’t supposed to…. I mean I… That is all.”  With that Mary squared her shoulders and marched back to her world of pain.

If you wanted to know something, ask a nurse.  The doctor’s union was too damn strong.  That, combined with their government enforced monopoly, wasn’t giving the world good, cheap health care, but instead overpaid mechanics with God complexes.

Dvora had watched and listened intently while he did the thing.  “Meghan told me you could do that.  You are a reader, aren’t you?”

Jack sat to recover the energy he’d used willing Mary to tell him the truth.  The process always left him drained.  Not as bad as the omen dream, but still drained.  He looked at Dvora, trying to judge how she was judging him-if she was judging him at all.  He tried hard not to read her.

There were more stories in the news about it every day. Some people (who knew how many?) could read other people.  Mostly, they read emotions, but there were rumors that a very few especially powerful talents could read actual thoughts.  What wasn’t being talked about anywhere and was supposed to be “top secret” was that, on occasion, some people could also influence others thoughts and actions.  Jack had also seen evidence that a very, very few could influence objects.

“I guess I am,” said Jack.  “Who knows anything about this stuff anyway?  I’ve always been able to read people.  With me, individuals are much harder to read than groups.  If it’s with an individual I have to like them, and it doesn’t work more often than it does work.”  He didn’t tell Dvora that he could read people he hated, but that it made him physically ill.

They sat for a while.  Jack hated hospitals.  Thirty-eight percent of money spent in hospitals is spent trying to cure problems caused by being in a hospital.  That little piece of knowledge gave him comfort, yes it did.

Jack wasn’t a sitter.  He was a doer.  He didn’t do grief well at all.  Anger, yes. His ex used to say he was only comfortable with two emotions. Thinking about her pissed him off so bad he couldn’t remember what she said the second emotion was.  He paced, feeling the fire in his belly grow.

Jack’s hatred for hospitals started when he was a kid.  That sickening, too-clean pine scent must cover something. If they had to use a smell that strong it’s got to be real bad, he remembered thinking when he was a kid.  Young Jack thought that smell covered the stink of rotting dead.  The hospital types made the lights too bright, like they were trying to fill all the shadows so Mr. Death couldn’t hide.  Now he didn’t have a place to hide either.

Later, he jumped as a phone he hadn’t noticed rang close by.  He snatched up the receiver on the old-fashioned phone nearly hidden behind the little plant on the table in the corner.

“Mr. McDonald?”

“Yes?” he asked eagerly.

“I’m Jane Fredericks with the San Francisco Reader. Our readers…” He could picture the little weasel hiding in somebody’s office, proud of conning the switchboard operator into connecting her to the little room. He slammed the phone down.  Pieces of the shattered phone flew about the room-one whizzed by his head like cut-rate shrapnel.  One of the biggest pieces bounced through the door as the doctor opened it to walk in.

Dr. Andrea Kramer was tall, taller than Jack, and so thin her lab coat hung on her like a poncho on a coat rack. She’d missed a button on the lab coat they used as a shield and badge of authority.  The circles under her eyes were big and dark enough to look a little like black eyes.  The doctor’s quick, certain movements pulled at his tired mind.  She seemed then like a member of some tougher, reptilian species.

Dr. Kramer didn’t remember Jack, but he remembered her.  Jack had one more friend than he had any right to because of her skill in the OR.  Dr. Kramer was the best thoracic surgeon in San Francisco.  According to some, she was one of the top five in the world. Andrea introduced herself, spun a chair around to sit straddling it like a man.  Despite obvious fatigue her movements seeming too fluid to be part of his clumsy race.  “We have Ms. McDonald stabilized.  Mary reported she gave you an inventory of Ms. McDonald’s injuries.  None of them, in and of themselves, except for the head wound, would worry me. Taken in total, though, the effect of the injuries to her system nearly overwhelmed her.  Her will must be extraordinary.  I’ve seen professional boxers with less heart, less fight.  She has considerable blunt force trauma to the left side of her head.  It looks like it might have been done by a punch.  If it was, it was a hell of a punch. Dr. Saroyan operated and believes he has fixed that problem.”

The doctor paused, pulling off her glasses.  She held them up to the light and then brought them to her mouth.  Her tongue flicked out quickly, wetting each lens.  She grabbed the corner of her smock, rubbed the lenses, checked her glasses against the light again and pushed them back up her nose.

“Dr. Saroyan can explain the head injury better than I, but there is hope.  Do either of you have knowledge of the Glasgow Coma Scale?”

Jack thought he should remember the Glasgow Coma Scale, having led with his head so often, but his brain felt full of mud.

Dvora said: “It’s a test of brain function.  Simple tests like: Do the pupils react to light?  Does the patient react to pain, or try to speak, and so on?  A number is assigned to each result.  These numbers are combined and the higher the number, the better the chance for full recovery.”  Dvora recited it, despite her concussion, as if it were a memorized lesson from grammar school.

The doctor nodded with a look of approval, “Excellent.  Meghan’s score leads us to believe there is hope Ms. McDonald can regain consciousness and full use of her faculties.”  The doctor paused and made very direct eye contact with each of them in turn.

“I must make sure you both understand what I’m going to say next.  There are no guarantees.  Despite the confidence of my colleagues, and what you might read in journal articles, we know very little of how the mind works.  So much of recovery from an injury like this seems to depend on force of will.  And, some luck is involved.  I want you to understand that there is hope.  But there are no guarantees.  Ever.  I know this might seem cruel.  I want you both to tell me in your own words what I have just told you.”

Jack was pleased with what the doctor said.  Making sure that the message was understood would lead to fewer dashed hopes and feelings of promises broken.  And, Meghan’s will was astonishing.

Jack said, “You just told us that there are elements of luck and you don’t really know anything.  You believe that force of will is important.  And, that we are not without hope that Meghan will recover, but no guarantees.”

Dvora looked relieved when she said, “You have given me hope.  You said that so much depends on her will.  I have never met a person stronger-willed than Meghan.  I know successful entrepreneurs, world-class athletes, and prima ballerinas.  None of them are as tough as my beautiful Meghan.” Then her mouth turned down and she said, “And there is real danger.  You make no guarantees.  None.”

The doctor’s beeper went off and she stood quickly, swaying.  He reached out to steady her.

“When can we see her?” Jack asked.

Dr. Kramer rested her cool, dry hand on his for a few seconds. The doctor looked as if she were surprised by his question.  “You can see her now.”  Her mouth turned down. “Make yourselves ready.  You won’t like what you see.”  She turned and jogged through the door.

Jack helped Dvora back into the wheelchair and pushed her down the hall, around two corners to the left and back to the right, following the signs to the SICU.  A tiny nurse with multicolored hair extensions visible through her head cover, met them, checked their IDs against the approved visitors list, gave them instructions and had them don masks.

“They did her real bad,” she said. “Prepare yourselves.”

Dvora’s nails bit into the leathered skin on the back of Jack’s hand.  Later, he would be surprised to see scabs where blood dried.

The blue of Meghan’s veins showed through the skin on the back of the hand that wasn’t swathed in bandages. A machine breathed for her through a tube in her throat.  All her beautiful red hair appeared to be gone, her skull wrapped in bandages.  Another tube ran out from under the dressings over her belly.  Her left leg and right arm were encased in those clear plastic inflatable things they use before they put on casts.  Meghan’s chest rose and fell along with the too-perfect metronomic sigh of the breathing machine.  The room was so still over Dvora’s silent tears that Jack could hear the steady hum of electrical devices. That death-defying too-clean scent filled his senses.

Standing over Meghan, looking down at her, Jack remembered a deal he’d made with God while he was in the Gulf. If he could make a deal with God.  If he ever believed in a God. He promised that if he made it back he’d never kill again. It was an easy deal to make.  He never thought he’d have any reason to go back on the deal.

Taking another human’s life was the hardest thing Jack had ever done.  They say the first life is the hardest to take.  Bullshit.  The first one’s easiest.  He still remembered how the man looked, lying on his back, trying to push his intestines back into his belly.  Jack couldn’t stand the man’s screams.  When he cut the man’s throat to stop his screams, the silence was deafening.

The next time Jack needed to kill, he couldn’t pull the trigger. Dying was easier than seeing another face in his nightmares.  He stood, waiting to die, making his peace, when the enemy’s weapon jammed.  As the enemy tried to clear the jam, he watched his own weapon come up and felt it dance in his hands like a black snake.  His textbook-perfect three round bursts cut the enemy to the ground.

The enemy was small and easy to roll over — like a doll.  Jack looked to see if he had anything useful like 5.56 rounds or RDX in his pouches.  He was careful.  Some of them were wired to blow.  One of the rounds, maybe the one that shredded the enemy’s intestines, had ripped away most of the enemy’s leggings.  The dead man had the penis and testicles of a child, bare of pubic hair.  He couldn’t have been more than ten or eleven.  One of Jack’s rounds had made a hole precisely in the middle of the child’s forehead.  He knelt next to the body of the boy, looking at that hole in the boy’s head.  He stayed there, staring at that hole until the cramps in his legs were fire and it was too dark to see that hole in the middle of the boy’s forehead.  Strange how now, years later, most times when he tried to close his eyes to sleep he could see that hole perfectly.

Jack remembered the first man he killed, the boy, and all the others, and would until the day he died.  According to some, he would remember after that.  He didn’t think so, but who knew?  In the small hours of the morning when his soul is sick and the narcotic of sleep won’t come, he talks to the dead.  He tells them he didn’t want to kill them. He tells them he had to.  He thought it might have been true before.  He knew that when he caught the men who did this to his sister he would look into their eyes and not hesitate as he snapped their rotten necks.

 

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